Chakeber

I love it. It's basically saying you're just a replacement, in the background. The extra friend no one really truly thrives on or couldn't do with out. I just love ...

Really great! I'll be coming back to full review this soon.

Thank you! I'm about to post chapter 2 also :)

Hey! Thanks for your help! I actually reposted this chapter yesterday and it still doesn't have any reviews. I'd like a couple because i sort of added some stuff and ...

Thanks so much for the advice, I fixed it all I'm pretty sure. Would you mind rereading it and letting me know if it's improved? Thanks for all the time ...

Oh no it wasn't harsh at all! It was exactly what I wanted. I made some changes, but what do you mean by comparisons? Thanks for the help :)

Very good! I love how you set it up, you can tell each stanza pertains to the italics line at the bottom of them. I'm a bit confused at what ...

It is a gorgeous poem and I cant tell you put a lot of though, time, and heart into it. It's wonderful. I feel like even if it weren't in ...

Thank you so much! I'm glad it as quick paced for readers that was my objective :)

Thanks! I reread it and fixed the errors, i appreciate you pointing them out. :)

Thank you so much! I appreciate the critique :)