CesareBorgia

Thanks! It's just a retelling of the actual story. :wink:

Thanks!

Thanks :D, I expect you to be confused though.

Thanks for the review, and it's simply to look up to Nadiya, I'll explain more in later chapters.

I actually like the name, and the chapter length is fine for a new writer.

*Deanie* I will review this, I just have to get done some of my writing first, before life interferes again.

Because I've seen better descriptions, I'm not trying ti be mean, I'm just trying to say that you should do better in that area. And you shouldn't think your work ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review, I like using bullets alot, and that is my real name, I think I'll change that.

Thanks!

Wow, you guys are so creative. :D

Thanks for the review, I'll add the edits when I'm done writing it. :D