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Re: hashtag
Hey this is Cesare Borgia, Happy review day, I am here to review you, duh. I just want to say that I love your word usage, for instance A preconceived ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Three
Hey Cesare here for a review The first thing I want to say is happy review day. I also wanted to say that I liked the correlation of chapters that ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric; Chapter Two
Hey Luc, it's Cesare again. This isn't a review, or is it. Well it will have great brevity to it. I have to say that there were some things I ...
Mar 25, 2014 -
Re: Vampiric
Hey Luc, it's Cesare This isn't a review. I just have to say that this is a really good novel, and I regret waiting until you were finished writing it ...
Mar 25, 2014 -
Re: A hiding Nightmare
Cesare Borgia This was a great poem, but I first have to point out some nitpicks. A Nightmare isn't always lurking in the depths of your sleep, I would've changed ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: A Place of Wonder
~Ces Here for a review Escape to a place of wonder. A place where your imagination, dreams and desires are everything. A place where you never have to grow up, ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: A Love Affair with Orange Juice
Cesare This was a laugh out loud poem. It was really, really funny. I take you home with me From the market, All the while restraining myself From drinking you ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Deep down
Hey CesareBorgia Here for a review. Although the poem was short, it was a very good poem. Because of it's brevity, I will review line by line. Deep down, I ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Review nice or don't review at all.
Um hey I generally get good reviews, so I don't have this problem. But I have to say that it wouldn't be a good review if the reviewer didn't point ...
Mar 15, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)
Cardinal CesareBorgia here for a review. Nitpicks: This is a really good story because I didn't find any nitpicks. And I find a lot of nitpicks. Literary comments: I love ...
Feb 18, 2014 -
Re: The Graveyard
Cardinal CesareBorgia here for a review! Nitpikcs: Well, Lucrezia, I have to say that i didn't really see any petty nitpicks so i'll go straight to the literary comments. Meaning ...
Feb 15, 2014 -
Re: The Walk
Cardinal CesareBrogia here for a review. Nitpicks: Since it is a poem, I don't have nitpicks because poetry is allowed to have grammatical errors. xD Literary Comments: one: this poem ...
Feb 13, 2014 -
Re: Prologue
Cardinal CesareBorgia here for a review I wanted to say that this was a great way to start the story. Nitpicks: I only found one spelling error as I was ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: How about...NO!!!!
Cardinal CesareBorgia. I'm starting the review right away. Nitpicks. There was no grammar and spelling marks. That is a bonus. Literary Comments: After reviewing the story again, I finally caught ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Them
Cardinal CesareBorgia here for a review. Because it is a poem, and poems are supposed to be gramatically incorrect, it will be a short review. Now to the review...uggh. This ...
Feb 12, 2014
