Celticmusicgirl

The spotlight illuminated the stage as the large, red velvet curtains were drawn to reveal an expansive orchestra. It was truly a sight to behold. The violinist's bows, poised and ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Celticmusicgirl. Ok wow! This is very interesting. I can't hardly wait to find out where you intend to go with this. I think there was only ...

Hey Wolfie! Celtic here! Green= Corrections and suggestions. Blue= I like. Red= incorrect or doesn't make sense. This is the first chapter to my expansion of a short story I ...

This is an interesting piece you have here. I noticed a few grammar mistakes like the pronoun "I" not being capitalized and in the first couple of sentences I notice ...

green = I liked blue= suggestions and corrections Ok so I know this is a little long and rough but I thought I'd put it on now cause I'm too ...

Ok Wow this is a great piece I found one slight problem. Maybe it's just me but I had a hard time imagining how the other characters besides Silver look. ...

Stella, I love your work. You can rewrite my stories anytime! Ok now onto a review for you. I love how you can take anything, like a classic story, and ...

Stella you are an amazing writer! Probably better than me! I have oen question what exactly is this whole cliche thing that makes Alec and Tessa know that Gerry is ...

Ok I love this it is hilarious! this is a first wizard and vampire thing i have read here. Good Job! I agree with the others you grammar needs work ...

I agree with kladi, it is a great alternate point of view of how the earth came into existance. Probably, what I like most is the way it flows like ...

ok Overall this is great I love this. Just a couple of misspellings here and there but hey everyone does that. I noticed in a couple of spots you kept ...

Ok so this has gotten me more into the Eragon books. This was a very beautiful piece it flowed almost like poetry or something. I loved it. You should write ...

Ok wow this must have been crazy on facebook. This was totally awesome I loved it. It really makes you laugh. Thank you for posting. I didn't see any errors ...

ok this was great I have to admit. You are very clever and creative with this. I like that in a person epsecially one who writes. As far as errors ...

YAY! more FLUFFY! sorry. As for your review, I did not see any errors other than the ones already pointed out. I like your idea for twilight and buffy mixed ...