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CelerityFire21

CelerityFire21

  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: I dare....

    Okay, first off, I love this poem because, even thought it's short, it isn't overwhelming, and the words in it are completely inspiring. I love rhyming in general, so naturally, ...

    Nov 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: its going to be okay.. thats all lies.

    Oh my gosh. I would say this is beautiful, but the subject doesn't give off the right vibe. I'd say this is enlightening, but it's to dark. So, i'll say ...

    Nov 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Safe Haven

    Wow. I think that this is a really realistic poem, especially to me because it artfully depicts the need to get away, and I thin a lot of people can ...

    Nov 17, 2013
  • Other » Other, General Re: A Backwards World

    If everything was completely opposite, the world would be perfect. I wouldn't be happy with who I am, and I wouldn't know who I was meant to be. I people ...

    Nov 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Dark Thief

    Wow. This was an amazing first chapter, and I really love the main Idea and the plot of this chapter. I'm anxious to see what the foreshadowing about Lucas being ...

    Nov 16, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Equivalent of Hearts

    I really love the pattern and the rhythm in this poem because it gives a bit of life to words(Yes, I know it sounds corny, but it's true). I also ...

    Nov 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: What!?

    If this was a nonsense poem, then you must know, it fits me perfectly. It's very spontaneous and appealing, and I like your vocab and questioning. Despite the second line, ...

    Nov 16, 2013


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott