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Re: I dare....
Okay, first off, I love this poem because, even thought it's short, it isn't overwhelming, and the words in it are completely inspiring. I love rhyming in general, so naturally, ...
Nov 18, 2013 -
Re: its going to be okay.. thats all lies.
Oh my gosh. I would say this is beautiful, but the subject doesn't give off the right vibe. I'd say this is enlightening, but it's to dark. So, i'll say ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: Safe Haven
Wow. I think that this is a really realistic poem, especially to me because it artfully depicts the need to get away, and I thin a lot of people can ...
Nov 17, 2013 -
Re: A Backwards World
If everything was completely opposite, the world would be perfect. I wouldn't be happy with who I am, and I wouldn't know who I was meant to be. I people ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: The Dark Thief
Wow. This was an amazing first chapter, and I really love the main Idea and the plot of this chapter. I'm anxious to see what the foreshadowing about Lucas being ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: Equivalent of Hearts
I really love the pattern and the rhythm in this poem because it gives a bit of life to words(Yes, I know it sounds corny, but it's true). I also ...
Nov 16, 2013 -
Re: What!?
If this was a nonsense poem, then you must know, it fits me perfectly. It's very spontaneous and appealing, and I like your vocab and questioning. Despite the second line, ...
Nov 16, 2013
