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Re: The Unnoticed
The very few nitpicks that there were have already been picked up so I'm going to skim right over them and just review what I did and didn't like, okay? ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Person
This simple, amusing poem has made me happy. It's so damn true! Ahaa. I'm being serious. I couldn't find any faults with this poem. Like you said, if it was ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
First of all, your title was what drew me to this. And now I understood why this has so many likes. It's beautifully written. Even though it's relatively simple, it's ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
Just because I'm a Christian Doesn't mean it's okay to mock my beliefs, Or to call them and my God stupid Just because I'm a Christian Doesn't mean I'm a ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Emergency
Wow. This was beautiful. Perhaps the use of that particular adjective sounds a little... morbid but I really liked this poem. Yes, it was dark but at the end of ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Glitter
Do you know what I first loved about this story? The simplicity of it. I was hooked from the moment I saw the title and the description line underneath. 'I ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Forget the World~1
Hey Tabby :) You asked me to read this and so I decided - why the hell not? So here's my review for you, even if it comes out a ...
Jan 23, 2011 -
Re: Hurtful smiles
Hey Dudette :) You've given me some epic reviews so I'm hoping to return the favour, even though mine probably won't be as awesome, especially as your writing is fabulous. ...
Jan 22, 2011 -
Re: Paper Flowers
Hey. First of all, I thought this was really great. The way you wrote it made me see the scene before my very eyes and I could almost feel the ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: hide
I agree with originalhobbit :) This poem may be short but it cuts straight to the point. It's very heartfelt, despite it's length and I'm sure many people can apply ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Anger Splatters
First of all, I think that this flows really well. The words could mean anything and although I don't know whether you intended for it to be that way or ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: The Words on my Skin
Hey :) First of all, I just wanted to say that I enjoyed the story. It was sort of creepy but I could sort of understand it, because it was ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: The Lies Disney Told Me
Hey :) Firstly, I am going to take a few moments to say that I loved this piece. I think you've said what every girl ever wanted to say. And ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Catch a Shooting star
For a piece that you randomly wrote, this is very good. I'm impressed. There were no grammar or spelling mistakes that I could see, so I'll skip that :) I ...
Jan 2, 2011 -
Re: Ashes To Ashes
Hello. Like the other two above me, I believed, until stated, that the main character was a girl. That's not necessarily a bad thing because you did state that he ...
Jan 2, 2011
