Catalyst

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed!

I had been holding that one in for a while... thanks for reading!

Ah, apologies-- I never spotted the satire tag.

I'm not entirely sure it is, Alex. Either way, I agree with all of Knave's points here.

Thanks for all these reviews! I'll have quite the order to fill when I return the favour. So, as this is the third review you've written for my stuff TODAY, ...

Thanks so much for the review(s)! Shame you had trouble understanding the chapter. The thing I'm working on the most right now is making my stories clear and flowing well. ...

Absolutely!

Sidenote! Turns out I totally missed your previous instalments! I know where to turn if I need something to review.

Hey there, thanks for the review! To address your point regarding why the first paragraph was in italics, it's because the Chapter starts with the characters racing through the woods, ...

Thanks a bunch for the review! I'll keep an eye out for grammar issues like that in the future, I absolutely agree with you on your point regarding the "iota" ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks so much for the review! This was really helpful and inspiring, lemme just address a few points. And if it was confusing in any way, please note that this ...

*Chestnut nods approvingly*

KORIS ARE A THING?! ... I should really google my fantasy gibberish before inserting it into a story.

Wow. This is maybe the most condensed stream of great advice I've ever witnessed on this site. Thanks! I still have to absorb all of that, but with regards to ...