CastlesInTheSky

Hey there Lord Anzius! Here as requested. I am one of the harsher reviewers on this site, so don't be offended by my comments. The view was very beautiful, as ...

Hey there, CK Lynn! Here as requested. I'm reviewing the updated/revised version, by the way, so don't worry that I've reviewed the first one, or whatever. “She’s dead, Clark. I ...

Hey there! -shakes hands- I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. Just one technicality: She looked across to the other table at the group of girls, as They laughed; ...

Hey there, Lucy! Here as promised. I read through the previous chapters and chose this one. ^_^ On with the reviewing. (I can be really, really harsh, but it's only ...

Hey, mizziceberg! Here as requested. I'm one of the harsher critiquers on this site, so please don't be offended by anything I say. I'm only trying to help, not to ...

Hey there! I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. -salutes- I will admit I haven't read the other chapters, (sorry) but I will. 1. It’s over. The day is ...

Hey there, unique lyme! Just one thing - there's a rule here that the ratio for reviews to posts has to be 2:1. So for every post you make, you ...

Hey there! You have some good ideas and the title is original. However, there are spelling + grammatical mistakes. I've corrected some: 'I cant wait till i can go and ...

Hey there, Spike! There's good emotions here - but it's all a bit overdone. Make it original, make it your own. :arrow: Use concrete imagery and vivid descriptions. Love, hate, ...

Here as promised. :wink: Sorry if this is a bit harsh, I only do it to help. Just yell at me if I get too intense. :oops: Okay, here's Sarah's ...

Hey there June! Yay! Some work from you to review, finally. :wink: Jigg's done technicalities - so I'm just going to do an overall. The afternoon sun seeped through my ...

“Cause you're hot then you're cold You're yes then you're no You're in then you're out You're up then you're down” Merry! >.< You just got that song into my ...

White snow fell from the heavens as they plunged down into odd shapes and sizes onto the cobblestone streets of London, but no one knew that murder was going to ...

Hey there, tzmanda! -shakes hand- I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. I hope you don't find my comments harsh or anything. I'm a stricter reviewer - but in ...

Hey there, Margaret! Just one thing before I crit - there's a rule on this site that you need the ratio for reviews to posts to be 2:1. So, for ...