CastlesInTheSky

Hey there, anti-pop! :D Here as requested. By the way, nix means get rid of. You probably know that, it's just I keep getting asked it, so thought I might ...

Here as requested, Haruno! :D "Wake up, you urchin!" A rough voice with a heavy Northern accent grated Bane's eardrums as he stirred himself into conciseness. I presume what you ...

Here as requested! :D Up ahead her half-sister and stepmother occupied another elephant, behind was a train of their possessions. Replace the comma with a semi-colon, it makes more sense. ...

This is a prologue to a story I wrote. It's all based on true events, but I added a few things in. I may change the title in the future, ...

Here as requested, dreamintechnicolour! [s]Unsure of themselves,[/s] they periodically hurl a handful of raindrops like gravel; then retreat as if to see if the tiny people on the sidewalk will ...

Hey there, Memento! Before I start my critique, there's a rule on YWS that for every post you do, you must have 2 reviews. So browse the forums and find ...

Hey, Galerius! Here as requested. I'm tired, so forgive me if some of my comments make no sense. Breaking pillage dark of dust Maybe I'm just being slow, but I ...

Here as requested, Nutty! Sara’s finger was on the monitor’s power button, preventing me from turning it back on. This reads a bit clumsily because of the multiple apostrophes. I ...

Great expecations Oh and I hated Catcher in the rye. *sobs* :( Moving on swiftly. This is getting to be such a cliche, but Twilight. I laughed at it most ...

Here as requested, Nutty. :wink: It's late, so this review may turn a bit inane, in parts. Steam rose from the cauldron as a mixture of chopped carrots and potatoes ...

The Queen is here as requested for the deathly one. :wink: Nitpicks first, Angel dahling. And random things I liked. Sleep wouldn't come. It played with my eyes, making them ...

Hey there, NightMistress! I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. I just stood there as I looked at the person in front of me. He was no longer the ...

Here as requested, Ashley! It looks like you need an indepth review, so I'll get cracking. :D Nitpicks first... Looking back on my life, I know that there are things ...

This is new...still working on it. Any type of suggestions are welcome. And any type of criticisms are welcome as well. Harsh works!!!! Yay! Jasmine you're back! *applause* Okay, harsh ...

Hey there! I liked this, it wasn't prententious and it wasn't trying to show off. The concept and ideas were good, if not a little bit, 'duh'. I think you ...