Cassie911

Great descriptions. You give a lot of really good visuals and personification that give it a lot of life. on top of it all your word choices are wonderful. My ...

Oh my God this is so relatable! there are a couple spelling errors but thats no big deal. I absolutely love the concept of it but I would try playing ...

I absolutely adore the "old style" of this (if that makes sense). Your really good at sticking with your theme and voice, something I have a problem with. So kudos ...

Jesus, you couldn't pay me to be a teenager again. lol This totally takes me back to junior high! I love the flow it has, it reads really easily. The ...

I love this! It reminds me of my writing a little bit it. It shows weakness (or blindness) that evolves into strength and lessons learned. The only critique I have, ...