CarsonTheArson

This made me laugh! And the title captured my eye. I would never think about writing a poem about farts. Very original! This is a first for me, reading a ...

Neat story! I like all the suspense and wondering what the battle is all about. I don't know if this is just a little short story thing or if you ...

I haven't read the first chapter of this, but I think I will have to :) I like how Cole is this mysterious hero. I like your writing style and ...

Interesting storyline. Makes you wonder what is going to happen. Well, all stories should do that, shouldn't they? It's the good ones that draw you in and make you want ...

Loved it! All the description was really good and I love the scenes you were able to create. I hope that I Will be able to read more of this ...

This seems to be a neat story. Is Gareth Valerian's father? That seems to be the connection. Or maybe it was Tristan? It's good when you get your readers to ...

This seems like it will be a good story, but I think you need to develop it a bit more. I know you said this is a preview, but I ...

I thought this was really good. I loved the comparison of the raccoons in the dream with Brittney and Lindsey. You captured the lesson well and this tied with reality ...