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Re: Stakes and Dates {Chapter 1}
Hohoho, Merry Christmas! ...What? It's not Christmas? Oh, I was talking about Christmas in July, silly! Yep, that's right, a green little elf here noticed you didn't get the two ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Paradise
Hey, Griffin! I saw this a while ago and really loved it, so I thought I'd come by to drop a review. First off, I'd like to say that you're ...
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: Timba and James
Hiii, Blackypoo. I was just stalking, or, uh, fangirlisminging . *teehee* So why don't I give you a proper review then, huh. I kinda told you what I thought about ...
Jul 16, 2013 -
Re: Parting Words
Hi! Your Secret Santa is back to review more of your work. 8) I'd like to remind you that I'm definitely not a poetry kind of gal, so this review ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Wooden Spears
Ho ho ho, and merry Christmas in July! 8) I also believe this story has a lot of potential. It's obvious that you have put a lot of thought into ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: When the Stars Went Out (Part 2)
Hi again! I'd be lying if I said that the end of this story was satisfying. Yes, this piece was written very well and I loved it, but because I ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: When the Stars Went Out (Part 1)
Hi, Lauren! Thought I'd drop by and review. :) Imagine an exponential growth graph. It starts off a little slow at first as with any normal story, but gradually as ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter Four: The Letter
Hi! Carina here to review the fourth chapter now. :) I didn't expect the story to jerk towards this way, and that's good. It means you're keeping the reader on ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter Three: The House
Heyya! Here for the third chapter~ This was a relatively short and quick chapter, so this time I'll tell you my thoughts on your story so far. :) Basically, Ryan ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter Two: Understanding
Hi, Dehendon! Reviewing chapter two now. :) Have I told you in my previous review about how great of a writer you are? Oh, silly me, I haven't! I absolutely ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter One: Some Girl
Hi there! This story looked interesting, so I'll be reviewing all your chapters. :) First off, you did a phenomenal job in portraying character voice and tone! Your style is ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Last Battle
Hi! Thought I'd come by to drop a review. I really loved the concept of this story. The narrator battling it out in a violent fight only to meet up ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: Temporary/Removal
Heya, here like I said I would. :] Like I said before, poetry isn't my forte, but I'll try my best. I really like this; it's unique, and the two ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 3
Hi, Deanie. So sorry this is really late. >_< But I'm here like I promised. :) First off, wow, a lot of stuff has happened and I'm just really feeling ...
Jun 19, 2013 -
Re: Chapter 2 - Eyes Wide Shut
Hi, Deanie! Here like I promised. First off, wow, what they went through is really gross and repulsive, ick! I couldn't imagine being in a crash like that and attempt ...
Jun 3, 2013
