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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Stakes and Dates {Chapter 1}

    Hohoho, Merry Christmas! ...What? It's not Christmas? Oh, I was talking about Christmas in July, silly! Yep, that's right, a green little elf here noticed you didn't get the two ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Paradise

    Hey, Griffin! I saw this a while ago and really loved it, so I thought I'd come by to drop a review. First off, I'd like to say that you're ...

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Timba and James

    Hiii, Blackypoo. I was just stalking, or, uh, fangirlisminging . *teehee* So why don't I give you a proper review then, huh. I kinda told you what I thought about ...

    Jul 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Horror Re: Parting Words

    Hi! Your Secret Santa is back to review more of your work. 8) I'd like to remind you that I'm definitely not a poetry kind of gal, so this review ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Wooden Spears

    Ho ho ho, and merry Christmas in July! 8) I also believe this story has a lot of potential. It's obvious that you have put a lot of thought into ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Literature Re: When the Stars Went Out (Part 2)

    Hi again! I'd be lying if I said that the end of this story was satisfying. Yes, this piece was written very well and I loved it, but because I ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Literature Re: When the Stars Went Out (Part 1)

    Hi, Lauren! Thought I'd drop by and review. :) Imagine an exponential growth graph. It starts off a little slow at first as with any normal story, but gradually as ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter Four: The Letter

    Hi! Carina here to review the fourth chapter now. :) I didn't expect the story to jerk towards this way, and that's good. It means you're keeping the reader on ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter Three: The House

    Heyya! Here for the third chapter~ This was a relatively short and quick chapter, so this time I'll tell you my thoughts on your story so far. :) Basically, Ryan ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter Two: Understanding

    Hi, Dehendon! Reviewing chapter two now. :) Have I told you in my previous review about how great of a writer you are? Oh, silly me, I haven't! I absolutely ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter One: Some Girl

    Hi there! This story looked interesting, so I'll be reviewing all your chapters. :) First off, you did a phenomenal job in portraying character voice and tone! Your style is ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Last Battle

    Hi! Thought I'd come by to drop a review. I really loved the concept of this story. The narrator battling it out in a violent fight only to meet up ...

    Jun 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Dramatic Re: Temporary/Removal

    Heya, here like I said I would. :] Like I said before, poetry isn't my forte, but I'll try my best. I really like this; it's unique, and the two ...

    Jun 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Eyes Wide Shut: Chapter 3

    Hi, Deanie. So sorry this is really late. >_< But I'm here like I promised. :) First off, wow, a lot of stuff has happened and I'm just really feeling ...

    Jun 19, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Chapter 2 - Eyes Wide Shut

    Hi, Deanie! Here like I promised. First off, wow, what they went through is really gross and repulsive, ick! I couldn't imagine being in a crash like that and attempt ...

    Jun 3, 2013


If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain