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Re: In the Hands of Six 1.1
HIIIIII, I'M HERE. Like I said in the pad, y u make me want to watch Doctor Strange and other Marvel movies now?!? if I end up dropping from LMS ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: The Lost Dragon 1.1
SOUND. I said I'd review this today, didn't I?! (lol what are my priorities here, reviewing before posting my own chapter) I blame u and omnom Speaking of Omnomnom, I ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: 24 Hours [January short story]
Heyyo! I actually saw @Tenyo's status about this piece and thought I'd give this a read. And I'm glad I did. It was a fun, light, and enjoyable read.
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part Four
Better late than never, right? :P Since it's been a while, I reread this piece and also refreshed myself with the previous chapter so I can give you a fair ...
Jun 6, 2018 -
Re: The Zombie Game [part 1]
Cat! Here as promised. I fiiiinally get to see the story that you've been a sneakin' around with, so let's dive right in! Nitpicks are a drag, so I'll tell ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Blue Arrows ~ Chapter 1
Cat!
Mar 19, 2018 -
Re: My Weakness, My Strength [Part 1]
Hi Mea! Honestly, even if this wasn't for the Olympics, I'd still review this because, um, SCI-FI OMG. :P Anyways, I broke this review down into six different components: style, ...
Feb 9, 2018 -
Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part Three
Back for round three! I confess, it's really late here and I'm really tired, so this review will probably not be as detailed as the others. That, and I'm running ...
Feb 8, 2018 -
Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part Two
Back for round two, and HAH! Silly boys. It's always fun to see know-it-all's fail. :P I spent the time to skim the other reviews so I didn't end up ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Black and White (Revised) - Part One
Hiiii Hunter! Some random background: I saw your wall post about this story, and you seemed really excited to polish it and share it. I've been on a weekly reviewing ...
Feb 1, 2018 -
Re: The Last Pages
Hi, Crobbins! Now this piece was a long one. @_@ This piece probably doesn't have reviews yet because of the length; I recommend possibly breaking it into parts in the ...
Jan 27, 2018 -
Re: Jack's Reckoning
Hiya! It's been, like, six years since I read Lord of the Flies, and to refresh myself, I went ahead and read the synopsis on Sparknotes so I can give ...
Jan 27, 2018 -
Re: Driving Lesson
Hi Radrook! As someone who has made some embarrassing oopsies in driver's ed and also some embarrassing accidents (I may have crashed into a pole once...), I thought this piece ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: Jotunheim
Heya! This was a nice piece that depicted an adventure of a traveler who stumbles across a giant monster who wants to kill him, then runs away on his horse ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: Coma
Hi Helena! Back for a review. :) Wow, this piece is great! It was definitely action+emotion combo, but more emotion because, well, you know. Your writing is incredibly captivating. I ...
Jan 24, 2018
