CandidDreamer

Wow, just wow. From the beging, I could have related to this story. Never satisfied, always feeling that something was wrong or missing. This is so emotional, and i love ...

First of all, I just wana say I write and read at the same time. 1. In the second paragraph, you didnt mention the main character getting up and walking ...

Hey, first off i wana say that Im reading and righting at the same time so that I dont miss anything. 1. No offense, but I dont like that first ...

Wow, just wow. I have never encountered this type of poetry writing before. It is interesting, and seems very complex. I have a feeling that writing like this must be ...

Hi, first off I wana say I review while reading, I think i get a better point across by doing so. 1. I absolutely love the beginning in bold. It ...

Hi, first off I wana say I review while reading, I think i get a better point across by doing so. 1. I absolutely love the beginning in bold. It ...

This poem is very weird....but i like it :) . It creates the feeling that im sure it was intended to. Tho, in ur third stanza, i feel as if ...

okay, first, yea, you do rush. try slowing things down with some more explanations, not long ones. Try adding descriptions to certain things and moments. You need more back story... ...

To begin with, i think this is a really good concept and idea, but it could use a lot of tweeking. First, it isnt really good in a story in ...

Very nice picture you painted here. It flows nicely, but i found it hard to keep up. Some of the colors in scenes dont add up, maybe its just me. ...