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Re: eulogies
My first comment and only nitpick: 'neighbours' is actually spelled 'neighbors', and 'pronouce' is actually spelled 'pronounce'. Now, down to the review. I really like this. But I have a ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Forgetting
I really like this. The length of your lines are very odd and it added something. It reminded me of missing the motions my grandma made when she first died. ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Toy
Hi Upile. I hope you are enjoying the site so far. First I want to say that I love this poem, but it, like all writing can use improvement. Nitpicks: ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: A cinquain
Hi Foo and welcome to the site. I hope you enjoy it here! I have found that poems for school can be the hardest because you have to be instantly ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: The Lovely Bones
I read the movie and I really enjoyed it. I thought they made it creepy enough, but they were basically telling the facts. Some of you say you didn't like ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Crunch ch1
First, you have hardly any reviews! I would put these chapters into a novel because that is much easier to navigate through than links. It is way more user friendly ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Powerless
I am so sorry for the delay in this review, but here I am so let’s get down to business. First I have to comment on you saying that it ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Crunch prologue
This is very good. It drew me in right away; that is so important for a prologue. Before I start my review I want to tell you I love you. ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Lilly Evan's diary 11
Because this is so short, I can't really give you an overall. So I will give you a few nit-picks. I know last time you were offended by my review, ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Enemy Chapter 5
Just to let you know, I haven't read the other chapters so if some of the stuff I say is wrong because I haven't read them I am saying sorry ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The New Kid
Alright I am not sure what kind of review you want so I will just give you the basic nit-picky then overall. Oh, and sorry in advance if you think ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: Nicholas : Part One {final edit}
It is great to see you are open to harsh reviews! Though I am not sure if I will be able to give you one, but I will try my ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration where'd you go? *Edited*
Alright I am going to give you a bunch of nitpicks. Note: blue and bold means I added punctuation. Inspiration, where'd you go?! I thought that maybe , You don't ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Deleted 6
I am here to review like you asked, but this was amazing and I am not sure I will be able to help you very much. My review will probably ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: The Only Exception
Have you ever found love? Seeing her.. And not knowing what to say? Talking to her, and, Suddenly realising 'realizing' that you have found your one? Long years have past ...
Jan 4, 2011
