Calligraphy

Alright this is the first time I have ever reviewed a script. I have not read the first part and I am short on time. So, sorry if this is ...

Teach Me To Fly. “Teach me to fly,” I encouraged. Alex was curled up on one of the lounges reading that small leather bound book. He looked engrossed in this ...

Before I say anything else this reminds me of a song more than a poem. Not just because of the length, but by the way you phrase everything. Like the ...

First I have to say that I loved (*likes*) this. It really touched me how even the smallest kid's hearts are hardened, but anyway I will get down to the ...

We have beheld a moment of bliss. Life melted away like we never cared As we lost ourseves ourselves in a kiss. ~~~ Against my cold empty chest His chest ...

This is not the kind of poem I would usually read or review, but I will try my best seeing you only have one short review so far. General comments: ...

I am here to review like you requested, but I am not sure why you asked again last time I didn't even help you because I like your work so ...

Because I forced you to put this up/write it I guess I should probably review like a nice friend. Headphones in my ears Background nose, just a ringing Leather couch ...

I watch you waste away You where born to shine But left behind Slowly fade to gray What left behind? I know I am being a stick in the mud, ...

Sky: Looking up, I see clear blue. Blue for life, blue for believe I think you mean belief Looking up, reminds me of The free space and your wings Taking ...

Sitting at my table, pencil in my hand, my teacher posed this question, The way you phrase this it sounds like the teacher could be in the room. I think ...

I am here to review like asked. I am going to try really hard not to force my writing style on you because this is not how I normally write ...

A door shut, a lock clicked, some questions arose Writing on air, something Belle did compose I would like more description on what she composed. I know the man didn't ...

This is a good poem. But I love all your poems Esther. You always work rhymes in just the right way. General comments: Life is going well for you, but ...

Well, this poem is very.... odd, and for some reason I feel like you had writers block when you wrote it. General comments: Lina Malina won't talk to me, She's ...