Cailey

this is very well written. I love the emotion put into this. the feeling you've expressed. the sorrow that lingers even now. I really don't have much of a review. ...

I like it so much. I am half asleep, so no real review, sorry. But, I had to say something. I liked it very much!! :D

Good job, now this deserves to be featured. All I have to say, is this was beautiful, and you do have God's grace. :)

Amazing!! This poem is wonderful, I have absolutely no nitpicks. It all flowed well, it made sense, it had enough emotion, enough imagery. It was just, brilliant, wonderful. Great job!!

I edited this, hopefully it's better with the new changes. :D

This was very short, sad, and yet filled with hope. I don't have a real review, although in some places your lines seemed too long. Either that or they were ...

Awe! This was so good, I loved it! I didn't notice any mistakes, so great job! Sorry, I know I'm not saying anything, and I'm probably wasting your time by ...

I don't have a review, but I had to say something! This was interesting and exciting. I just wanted to say good job. :)

No, it was good. And feel free to post as much as you like. I'm sorry if my review was harsh... Seriously though, keep writing, and when people tell you ...

Wow! I really liked this, it was so short, but so packed with emotion. I could see her crying, and drifting away. It was just really good. I don't have ...

Just want to say that I really liked this. It's packed with emotion and feeling. I especially love the short sentences, they really add to the poem. I don't have ...

Thanks so much for the reviews! :) I wrote this for a writing class a few years ago, and I know it could be improved. Thanks for giving me suggestions ...