Cailey

Thank you!! I will work on the awkwardness and all. And I made a few changes, probably as you were reading it. Again, thanks for the review!

Awesome, thank you for reviewing! I just wrote this as a spur of the moment kind of thing, and should have editted better. Usually I'm really good at editting before ...

Thank you. Maybe I will write a poem about you. :P I think I'll also go through and read some of your stuff. I really appreciate you wanting to read ...

Okay, so, I was just a bit frustrated, and wrote this pretty quickly. Feel free to review the crap out of it. Don't be intimidated by the fact that it's ...

Hm, this was interesting. I feel some of those describe me perfectly, some not so much. I could see some worse qualities I have due to my writerness. Also, as ...

Yes, Yes, yes!! I like it!! :D I love how you say, I could have told you so, and I saw it coming, and all that. I've been in that ...

Thank you! And the rhyme was abc, abc, although now that I read it over, I realize I did miss a few. Oops. :)

Why thank you!

Thanks so much! I mean, I know it's good to get awful cruel reviews that tell you all the things you need to fix. But writing is made worth while ...

I liked this one. You talk about "you" as someone you don't really know, but want to help, but can't... I don't think that made any sense, but yeah.

Thanks, again, it was for a class and I was supposed to keep it short. I was also trying to write more as if I were a younger kid. But ...

Thanks a ton for your review. Yeah, I reread it and didn't like the line about his parents either. I will work on improving that. :)

Hey, this was pretty harsh, but thanks so much for it anyway. I'll work on it some more, I was writing this for class and one of the things I ...

Awe, this made me sad. I've felt a lot like this before, and you did a good job at expressing it very simply. It isn't so much a broken heart ...

Wow, that's eventful. and shows the irony and stupidity of angry mobs. I liked it, and while it sounds like it must have been awful at the time, it did ...