Cailey

Don't have much of a review. I did notice some mistakes, but now I can't find them. So, maybe read through it once more and see if you can find ...

That was beautiful, I love it. I was so caught up in the poem that I forgot to check for grammar and spelling mistakes. So I only have one correction ...

Great job! I just read psalms 46 after reading your poem. Psalms 46:1 is one of my favorite verses. I can only imagine what the music for this song is, ...

I like this, though the first is best in my opinion. :) I really love how you described them, nameless and faceless, and repeatedly say they don't matter, yet by ...

What's backwards is forwards Comes tumbling down This is the only line that sounded weird... I loved the rest and have no complaints! (Although punctuation would be nice...) You did ...

I read the other comments and am very in between. I like the poem, it's very simple. Yet, it didn't seem very poetic... I felt like I was just reading ...

And if you come and fly with me, You'll see as I see. You'll see as I see felt off to me. It didn't fit with the stanza. And each ...

First off, this was a wonderful poem, so full of emotion. I don't even want to review it because of how personal and how beautiful it is. Yet, you put ...

It feels so strong, I don't like the fact that there are so many commas here. Maybe add some other type of punctuation to add variety? Pulsing inside, Gently at ...

Ok, so first off, this seemed way too abrupt to be a poem. You tell the reader everything without trying to disguise it with imagery or anything. It should have ...

Wow, while reading this whole poem I felt like it was a super deep meaningful poem and I felt like I was missing most of it... Still, what I was ...

'He loves her' And 'He loves him,' Don't you see? So, yeah, do you mean She loves him? Because the ending kind of blew up the whole poem. I just ...

So, I still am not sure what happened to the person you're talking to. Did he/she die? Or you mention love, was the narrarator someone who just got dumped? Anyway, ...

Woah! I was expecting a totally different poem from reading the title. And I had to read the poem twice because it was awesome, and completely unexpected. There were a ...

Well, now I'm confused, because when I read this it all made perfect sense. Then I saw it was suposed to be confusing.... Now I'm wondering why I understood it. ...