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  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love is Normal

    Hello there! Thank you so much for you kind words EllieMae! It really means a lot to me. Returning back to this site and to my work after a REALLY ...

    Feb 26
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flame

    Thank you so much for the review. I was actually feeling low right now, and looking back at my own poem and all the wonderful reviews that I have, it ...

    Feb 26
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love is Normal

    Hey Elsinore, thank you for your great review. i am happy to see that you also liked my poem. As for the thing you pointed out about the commas, and ...

    Jan 28, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love is Normal

    Thank you for the kind words Leya! I am happy to see that you loved my poem. I actually wrote this amidst the time i had some real feelings for ...

    Jan 28, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Pitch black

    Hey dreamyAlice, thank you for your valuable review! :) Reading your review, I was really able to understand what you were trying to say. Whenever I read this poem,I do ...

    Jun 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Pitch black

    Thank you for your valuable insight! Now that you pointed it out, the line %u201Cit is pitch black today%u201D did feel a bit too repetitive, and I could really see ...

    May 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Chickens Re: Sparrow On The Morn'

    Loved the tone of the poem. It was lively, cheerful and pure. It was really able to make me smile. The simple narrative style and the amazing imagery was able ...

    Apr 13, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flame

    Thanks man!! Happy to be approved by The Corn Dog Association!!

    Apr 9, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flame

    Thank you so much!!

    Apr 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: F*** You

    That%u2019s very sad to hear. I really hope you are able to overcome this pain soon.

    Apr 8, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: i wish you could hear my voice, even as i cry at my desktop

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    Humans developed languages in order to express their thoughts and feelings. But, it had started to seem to me that these all words that we have created specifically for the ...

    Apr 7, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Flame

    Thank you so much! This is actually the first time that I have made anything I have written public, and being praised for for something I have written for the ...

    Apr 7, 2023


Go in fear of abstractions.
— Ezra Pound