Caesar

the pleasure is mine. :)

I like c:

Ugh, post fail.

I feel like a poetry no0b

I'm a huge fan of Magic the Gathering, but I'm not sure exactly what this is? if you do get around to writing the novel, do message me, as I'd ...

Hmm? Oh yes. By getting rid of it, I mean getting rid of it within the prologue, and re-write it somewhere else. Later on, perhaps. Establish the plot within the ...

OH. I just wanted to say, in Italian, the word simulacrum means translates directly to 'false image or statue of a god'. However, in English, idol works just as well.

I deny both God's and Satan's existence, for the record. I am no Luciferianist. Merely an anti-theist. ^^

You managed to catch the meaning of this almost perfectly, bar the final stanza. There is no redemption, only contamination and hypocrisy.

Iiii hate lag.

I do not have anything against you, jordin, let us be clear. However you need to understand what mistakes you committed to correct them -- consider it for your own ...

I do not have anything against you, jordin, let us be clear. However you need to understand what mistakes you committed to correct them -- consider it for your own ...

You might also want to add this to your first chapter, this as a standalone is utterly redundant.

You spelled 'More' wrong.

hmmm??