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Pair of mage dreamers:
-Abi&Kurt (red.warrior, blue.elementalist)
-Hilary&Kris (green.mesmer, red.hunterknight)
-Kirsten&Mark (whiteblack.fallenangel, black.vampassassin)
-Nikki&Karl (green.Elfranger, black.necromancer)
-Shobe&Aek (red.Wizardhealer, blue.scribe)
-Damien (white.cursedspirit)
Tatted:
-Abi. HipL front (starsandspirals)
-Hilary. To shoulderL (featherandbirds)
-Kirsten. Behind neckR (spirals) and underforarmL (Asiancode)
-Nikki. AnkleR (flowervine)
-Shobe. Top of handR (heartandsquiggles)
-Kurt. Around wristL (spiral)
-Kris. EyeR (spirals)
-Mark. Front of chestR (cross)
-Karl. ShoulderL (tribal)
-Aek. ForearmL (spiral)
-Damien. Chest (dragon)
Decks...
-Abi. Alpha Drive
-Hilary. Laughing Poison
-Kirsten. Angel Gear
-Nikki. Spell Rebel
-Shobe. Fiery Might
-Kurt . Strength bound
-Kris. Target destruction
-Mark. Dark Noise
-Karl. Zombie Arts
-Aek. Aeksile Operation...mental control
Work (main, part, (secret))
-Abi: ice cream, game store, hospital
-Hil: ice cream, game store, clothing
-Me: ice cream, café, (weapon)
-Nikki: ice cream
-Shobe: ice cream, art, (library)
-Kurt: game store, follows Abi
-Kris: game store, (prankster)
-Mark: game store, pet
-Karl: game store, (dealer)
-Aek: tech, game store, tutor
You have to find them in the heart of the battlefield/land or prove yourself...
-Home: mama tree, confidential, kind
-Island: Kuya JJ, skillful, open
-Mountain: Chris, strong (Joon+army assists Chris. Both look for Charles. Joon+army follow us to forests)
-Forest: Charles, smart
-Plains: Mr. Yin & Mr. Yang, good guys, helpful, prepared, mysterious
-Swamp: Death and Pain, bad guys annoying, slightly perverted, likes to scare, sadistic
Values...
-white: order, protection, light, law.
-blue: knowledge, manipulation, wave.
-green: strength, ferocity, life.
-red: freedom, fire, impulse
-black: death, ambition, darkness.
Problems at spots...
-Island. Flood leading to tsunamis
-Mountain. Fire hazard
-Forest. Earthquake
-Plains. Strong winds or storms.
-Swamp. Air pollution
Their ultimate goals...
-Mama Tree: protect, heal, revive, and make us train/practice daily
-KuyaJJ: teach us whereabouts, patience, intelligence, counterattacks, camouflage/hide
*Esp. Blue= focus on prediction and illusions
-KuyaChris: strengthen us, increase speed/accuracy agility and such
*Esp. Red=intimidate
-KuyaCharles: be confident, cover trails
*Esp. Green=befriend creatures
-Mr. Yin:(angel, white winged one black speck, white hair, yellow eyes) guide to right paths, strategize
*Esp. White=how to heal
-Mr. Yang:(angel, dark winged one white spot, black hair, purple eyes) don't hesitate, bad guys weaknesses and strengths,
*Esp. Black=do smart
-Damien: (two sided spirit; good is blue eyes, bad is red eyes) turns into butterfly to disguise himself (he becomes a bad spirit when he gets pissed.)
*Me. Magical defense
-Death:(demon shapeshifter) consume powers, rule Northern worlds (he thinks taking the girls power because they are stronger, assumes girls just dont use all their strength cuz we're stupid)
(weakness: skull in the center of chest)
-Pain:(vampire necromancer) same intentions as death. Likes girls blood because it's supposedly sweeter than boys. Has a pet bat named Ego.
(weakness: cross necklace)
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Hey!
First of all happy review day. Umaima here to be your reviewer.
First of all I am totally agreeing with LouisCypher here because even I have no idea of what you have written. Is this just the description of ...the caste of something. I bet you might want to mention that. You should!
Anyways I am correcting the grammatical mistakes here.
I think in this you should use a '-' after red and blue instead of a full stop. You see that is a grammatical mistake and it is seen throughout the ummm throughout your work (Please tell me what this is)
I bet you want to proofread it, now let this piece be just the description or whatever it is It is important to at least once proofread it.
Hope this helped. good luck for your next work.
OK here I am to try to help if I can.
This makes absolutely no sense at all here its like you wrote a huge book and then wrote what all of the names and all of the people and animals and thing and it is very jumpy if I may be so bold.
And is also looks like you wrote a hole description to go with it.
Any way your doing good if that was your point but not very interesting at all.
And what was the point of it it almost don't fit into my category even as a book.
Good luck next time and remember if you ever need me just call me and I will help you if I can.
And keep writing.
I'm a huge fan of Magic the Gathering, but I'm not sure exactly what this is? if you do get around to writing the novel, do message me, as I'd love to review it.