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Re: This is War (rewrite)
Blindfolded sheep I approve of this verse. #sheep This war is mine With righteousness and peace. Either I'm horrible at deciphering poetry/lyrics (which I am, which is why I'm leaving ...
Dec 13, 2012 -
Re: .
Trololo congratulations, then, on excellent memory skills.
Dec 8, 2012 -
Re: .
Ah bah, quotes messed up there.
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: .
You spelled grammar wrong, bud ;)
Dec 7, 2012 -
Re: Legion ov our Lord
Thanks, Dandruff. The repetitiveness needs to be worked on, it seems ^^ Although in my defense, when I wrote this, I knew it would lack depth. Call it an%u2026 experiment ...
Nov 28, 2012 -
Re: Legion ov our Lord
xD Thanks aqua!
Nov 27, 2012 -
Re: Legion ov our Lord
xD ov is the metal way of spelling things ;) as for the one-two-threes, I wanted to give it an, I dunno, military/ballad-esque feel, I guess.
Nov 27, 2012 -
Re: Red Winter
Yah, or, when you have something you feel is better, just edit this so you save points.
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re: Red Winter
Hmm. Good question. I tried with one of mine, doesn't seem to be a way to. Based on my rudimentary knowledge of how YWS works, I would say you can't, ...
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re: Red Winter
^^
Nov 16, 2012 -
Re: Lord of Lies
I swear, if I could like this a bajillion times, I would.
Oct 31, 2012 -
Re: Masquerade
Not bad. Not bad at all. I never knew you were a poet. The fifth and sixth stanzas were a bit muddled though. I positively love the last stanza, it's ...
Oct 25, 2012 -
Re: La Tua Voce Gioca
Ahhh, scusa, che cretino che sono, ho appena visto il titolo -- errore. Dovrebbe essere 'La Tua Voce Gioca', come l'hai scritto tu mi fa pensare al vocativo Greco che ...
Sep 26, 2012 -
Re: The Banished (Chapter One)
Flowery words? O.o xDDD :P
Jun 29, 2012 -
Re: The Black Doors Chapter 1
The swear is probably because of the computer software you're using, then
Jun 24, 2012
