Caesar

in case you're curious :D

thank you for the kind words! I was trying to re-evoke the old fashioned structure (Vergil), but I wouldn't go as far as comparing myself to the good Father :D

someone has been watching fate/stay night :D

hmm, I don't think an aura of mystery necessarily precludes powerful description. It is true that leaving questions unanswered is a fine way to create mystery, but there are ways ...

no problem, any time

a piece of advice: don't edit until you finish writing the first draft. I recommend you direct all your energies into finishing it first. Editing comes later. You can incorporate ...

then save your energy for writing, I'd say.

no problem. Have you finished the novel? If not, I don't recommend you edit quite yet.

no problem another piece of advice: don't edit this. If you're determined to write this novel, power through it to the end. Apply what you learn from reviews in the ...

probably my greatest issue with this is it seems you favored form over content. Your message wasn't clear to me, as synthetically as it was conveyed. It may just be ...

I can tell

set up the hype with a good chapter one ;D

then this prologue is not necessary at all ^^

not sure if you're criticizing the holy bible or jane austen.

Hi again, reading your prologue after chapter one because I'm a hipster. A prologue can only be judged in light of the rest of the novel, in my opinion. This ...