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Hey General, here to drop a thought on the second part of this installment. First off, you know I don't like reviewing grammar, but I think in this case it ...

Hey General, I thought I'd drop by to deliver a review. First off, I feel this piece is an improvement compared to your earlier works. Good job on that. However, ...

hey hey Zarhail, here to review as promised. This is an interesting start, right off the bat we have a dramatic situation, we're tossed right into the action. I like ...

It should be punishable by law to use 'softly' three times in one chapter, always after a line of dialogue. The first thing that I noticed is how painfully mechanical ...

While you have material for an interesting story, it is my opinion you should consider how you present this information to us. You have fallen into telling, as opposing to ...

“You’re Mother and Father were *Your That said, you should add more information to this chapter. It's one thing feeding the reader-dogs tasty morsels, a few bites at a time, ...

Hey there, this is very cinematic. Perhaps too cinematic. I feel this chapter is just paragraph after paragraph of boring exposition. The events are recounted in such a boring monotone ...

You must not have been inspired when writing this. It doesn't have a spark, anything to set it apart from all the myriad sappy love stories contaminating the internet. The ...

Don't get me wrong, I like Adventure Time. I haven't been following it really, I'm not up to date with the newest episodes and such, so I'll critique this as ...

Oh, I think there has been a misunderstanding here. I was under the impression this was a novel, not a cheap manga. But wait, this is under 'novel' :o! That ...

Let's get right down to it. My first impression of this piece reminded me of my brother's writing, when he was a bit younger than he is now, eight or ...

Hi! This actually wasn't that terrible! I wasn't prepared for the finale, I'll admit. That was something of a surprise. I enjoyed the ending. Good job. The beginning and development, ...

Now, for a proper review. Why is the prologue super important? Prologues should never be super important, barring rare exceptions. Your novel is not a rare exception. Your prologue served ...

Hi there, first off, I would like to invite you to consider the possibility that a title in caps lock does not make the work seem more appealing to readers. ...

lol @ red-head meme That said, I found reading through this difficult, clunky at times, painful in places, even. I would like to point out you started in the past ...