Caerulean

Fine. I missed that spot. XD :lol:

If you remove the title, you can't pretty much tell that it's about Math XD. But I like it though. :) Keep it up! Maybe, it'll be better if it ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys! :D I just found out after Charlie101's review that the last part had a mistake! >.< I edited it now.

Thanks for all the reviews! I'm not really a poem writer and I was just merely 'trying again'. I'm glad that I got the imagery part quite right. :) About ...

Thanks for the reviews, guys. I agree that this story needs a lot of development to make it 'beautiful' and all but, I actually just wanted it to be plain ...

Nice! :D I can never write a song like that! lol I'm so limited >.

Hey. This is the part two of my review. lol xD This is for the 2nd part of the chapter. :D Nitpicks: Sion may have been there, but the day ...

Gosh. Thanks for all the positive comments. :D I didn't expect them. xD Like what I said in the poem, I'm not really good at writing poems. By the way, ...

Oh, by the way, I forgot to say that you seemed to have used a lot of adverbs in this chapter. They say that a lot of adverbs makes the ...

Whew! I probably finished this! >_< Please review :D.

Thanks for all the reviews! I have edited this according to your remarks already. :)

Hiya, Thanks for the reviews guys! I went back and edited the things you mentioned. Imaginemymind: Thanks for reading! I'm glad to have another supporter. :3 *rubs hands together* Hunter ...

Thanks for reading and commenting, Zankoku :D. I really appreciate it :D. Anyway, I changed some of the verbal words to 'said' to reduce the so-much-being-descriptive thingy lol. I hope ...

Thanks for all the comments :D ! Anyway, I just hope there are other readers who would comment too :D xD

That was really intriguing! Nice poem! :) I just hope every atheist would be as good as the character in your poem. >.