Caerulean

Ooh, that's a very nice poem! :D I didn't catch anything that needs to be fixed. The thing I noticed is that when I first read it, it seemed to ...

Hey, Skins! :D I read this because it is featured lol and now, I'm finally making a review. xD Nitpicks: In another room, there was a red haired woman... - ...

Ooh, cool poem! :D I love it! xD And, it's in acrostics! Epic cool! :D lol (I'm so exaggerating XD) :D

Woot! Finally, a new chapter is up! :D So here I go again xD. Nitpicks: “Can you meet me, at the park?” - I think an ellipsis is more preferable ...

Nice, Sol! Another poem of yours is featured! Yay you :D xD! I'm not good with reviewing poems so I'll just say that I like this poem. :) I like ...

Cool! Your poem got featured! xD :D Anyway, I wouldn't comment much because the others had already caught a lot of things. I'm just here to say that I like ...

Nice poem! :) This is my 2nd review for this month's Review Day but, unfortunately, it will be short >_

I totally agree with Aussie about this. This leaves the readers to nothing. It gives the readers nothing. And, it tells the readers nothing except this seemingly endless sex scene. ...

Hi there! :D I'm here to make a review on a work of yours just like you asked me to. :) First of all, I think this should be called ...

Hey, Pink! Here I am again! Well, I actually have nothing to say but this is really a good chapter and in general, this is an excellent story! :D Anyway, ...

:D Haha, I was like 'Whoah! You really don't need me to review this XD'. The others have already caught a lot of things and I don't think my nitpicking ...

Umm...The other reviews actually felt harsh even though I'm not the writer of this poem. Anyway, sorry but I'll have to give another negative review. I don't have much experience ...

This is really an excellent poem :D. Like the other reviews, there is nothing much to say. The message is clear and the rhyming is epic xD. If I am ...

Woot! A new chapter is up! (I wonder when I'll get to finish mine...) Anyway, nitpicks! Groaning, I slid my finger between my strands of hair. - It seems better ...

Whoah. This was a really long chapter! I noticed a lot more things too...some are probably mentioned by the other reviewers already but I'm too lazy too cut them off ...