Caerulean

Wow. :D I guess, that's all that I can say. I wouldn't want to nitpick too. YWS is a really great site, filled with open-minded people. You wouldn't receive as ...

Hey, Skins. :) I'm here as you requested. Anyway, I haven't read the previous chapters so I have no idea what the plot is. xD Nitpicks: Something was... off. - ...

It still is connected to your work lol. Anyway, that was such an epic trailer. :D *thumbs up* The only thing that quite failed was the fire and snow effects ...

This was just EPIC Hilarious! XD I told Chase not to kick her stomach whenver the baby kicked - That was one of the tons that made me laugh. :D ...

Yay! A new chapter! (Why do I keep on saying that? xD) Nitpicks: I pointed a thumb at him and mouthed to Olivia - Pointed a thumb? How do people ...

This totally makes no sense at all! xD But, it was interesting to read. :) I love the part where 'Skins' appeared XD. Okay, this comment also made no sense, ...

His mouth forms and “o”, - Typo: 'an' That's only mistake I caught. Anyway, the suicide of the mother was, like what the others said, fast. That part of the ...

Ooh. o.o I was confused reading this poem until the last parts xD. I thought 'good enough to eat' and 'pea' were just figures of speech, but then, they were ...

o.O This is just epic! I love it. It's so wonderfully written, and totally realistic. (The title has typo though) I love the way you wrote it. There were only ...

Hey there. :) This story is nice. It caught me with its 'darkness' xD. However, the shortness is flawed too. As a story, I see no plot. I didn't get ...

Wow, I'm first! :D So, let me greet you with my nitpicks XD: “I’m working on getting my surgeons degree the University of Chicago..." - I think you missed a ...

I'm not good at reviewing poems nor making one so I'm sorry that this one wouldn't be a helpful review. Anyway, this poem is so epically done. :D I can ...

Wow, that is deep. I like it. :) Anyway, like what the other reviewer said: Adrenalin pulsing in my veins -- - Should be: 'Adrenaline'. 'Adrenalin' refers to some chemical, ...

Hello. :) I'm not really good with understanding (nor writing) poems so this comment may not be helpful at all >..

Hi. :) I've got nitpicks for you: ...watching my fingers hold the wooden writing utensil while not really watching it. - Huh? What did you mean by that? o.o Why ...