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Re: WW, 1st Poem Ever - A Creak in the Night
Hey there, Bus. Now, I don't really do that poetry thing very much, but I thought I'd take a stab at reviewing this one. I find it interesting that you ...
May 26, 2012 -
Re: Broken (chapter one)
Hey psudi, Sorry it's taken me a couple of days to get to this - revision and exams and all that. But now I'm here, so let's get to it. ...
May 26, 2012 -
Re: The Lack: Part 2/2
Hey again, WaitingForLife. So, I already reviewed the first part of this - and now I'll take a stab at saying something about this bit, too. I'm afraid I don't ...
May 24, 2012 -
Re: The Lack: Part 1
Hey there, WaitingForLife, I notice there's a Part 2 of this floating around the Browse area, but I'm a bit pressed for time right now, so I'll review this on ...
May 24, 2012 -
Re: Canem Inferni - Chapter 1 *Edited: Take Two*
Hey TPO, I didn't get a chance to look at this before you edited it up to Take Two, so I'm going to review this as though there wasn't a ...
May 19, 2012 -
Re: I didn't think...
Hey there, Wake! So, I don't know if this is part of something larger, or a standalone, but I like it either way! As a standalone piece, it encapsulates a ...
May 19, 2012 -
Re: The heart of a horse
Hey there, yubbies! First up, I'd like to say that I like the idea you're running with here. I've got a few books about horses as aids to healing on ...
May 13, 2012 -
Re: Their Cigarettes Burn
Hey there ahhhsmusch, This is a pretty interesting scene - a nice snapshot of a couple of characters at a moment in time. I really like the way you describe ...
May 12, 2012 -
Re: Restless Vengeance
Hey there, lindsay, I see you're pretty new here, so first up - welcome to YWS! Now, this chapter. I really like this. I have a bit of a soft ...
Apr 26, 2012 -
Re: A Window to the Future
Hi Anna, (First of all, you appear to have mistakenly pasted your story into the submission twice.) Let me start by saying that I like the concept here - the ...
Apr 14, 2012 -
Re: Opinions please!
Hey there, Ultimate, The first thing that strikes me about this is that it's very short - I often find that it's hard to gauge a piece of writing if ...
Apr 9, 2012 -
Re: See You Tomorrow
Haaaaiiii Hiccup
Apr 5, 2012 -
Re: Tripping Over The Rainbow
Hey there, evil_kookies. I'd like to start out by saying, this is a brilliant character piece. The narrator's voice is very clear, from the very first line, and stays consistent ...
Apr 5, 2012 -
Re: n/a
Hey there, This is an entertaining short piece - I really quite like it. Pieces like this go to show that you don't need a lot of action to make ...
Mar 31, 2012 -
Re: No Man's Girl
Misteh, I got chills. I'm not even making that up. This is beautiful. There are a lot of things I love about this - and a couple of little points ...
Feb 25, 2012