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Re: Into the Fire -1
Hey Stella! First: SHINY! I'm glad it's finally here, because I remember you first mentioning Flick Salamander, and thinking that the Shiny sounded awesome. Also, I'm loving your first line ...
Feb 3, 2013 -
Re: Heather' long path
Hey there, florageis, Would I be right in thinking that this is the first part of a longer story? I'm definitely interested to know what happens after Edna and Jared ...
Jan 31, 2013 -
Re: Cash Chapter 01
Hey there, AwesomeSauce! I remember I said I was interested in this way back, but it's taken me a while to get around to writing a review on it - ...
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Miss Deaf USA
Hey there, Purple! First up, thanks for posting this! Stuff I knew before about the Deaf community could pretty much be summed up as "it exists", so it was nice ...
Jan 23, 2013 -
Re: In This Time Of Eliminating Prologue/chapter 1-3
Hey there, Ly! First things that strike me - can I suggest making the font a little bigger, a little blacker, and adding a few more line breaks? There ought ...
Jan 17, 2013 -
Re: My Proof Of Life - Chapter 1 (Prologue)
Hey there, Ayame! So, I got some of my uni work out of the way, and got to reviewing sooner than I expected - so here I am to take ...
Jan 12, 2013 -
Re: The Plan
Hey there, anna! I'm here as promised to take a look over this for you. I'm going to make some general suggestions for it first, but I'll try and say ...
Jan 11, 2013 -
Re: the story of Benjamin a slave boy
Hey there, Ben! It's always nice to see a bit of historical fiction - it can be a rewarding challenge to put your own characters in a real-world context and ...
Jan 10, 2013 -
Re: Unaided
Hey there, John, I really love the plot and concepts in this piece! Different takes on magic are always fun, and I really like the idea of Eric flinging the ...
Jan 8, 2013 -
Re: The Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse
Hey there, Ephialtes, (I know this work was posted quite a few months ago by now, but I hope that some of what I have to say may still be ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: #23
Hey there, wonder, I'm going to start up by saying I really like this kind of writing, where there are no names, but there definitely are characters. The whole thing ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Matches
Heyheyhey Miste! I know I've been saying since you posted this that I like it too much to review, but I looked back today and saw how lonely it looked ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: The Unknown Romance
Hey there, Malavika, I have to say, I was expecting this to play out with a big drama, with Phil's love rushing into the wedding, or him rushing out. I ...
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: The Diamond Fist (1)
Heyheyhey, Bleusy, I'm not sure if this is going to come out nice and reviewish, because I liked this, and I don't know if I can find a lot to ...
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: A beginning to an end.
Hey there, brokenmemo, I have to say, I'm hooked by this idea. The idea of a 'superhuman needle' sounds like a fun one to play with - especially from the ...
Dec 28, 2012
