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Hey lit chick! I noticed that you have two posts, but no reviews. YWS would normally like you to do two reviews before posting work of your own, so get ...

The style is interesting. I like the haphazard sort of construction and the mood that comes with it, but the poem still needs to be refined. Some things definitely ought ...

Meaning. What I'm still wondering after reading this poem is, "What makes this an ode to Constantinople?" The poem is all description, which doesn't take it far in the first ...

It's like drowning in a thesaurus. I prefer to have poetry slosh comfortably around my ankles, not bash me over the head with a vocabulary lesson. Even as a performance ...

I agree with Fand; this is babble. I don't care much for the cute twist at the end; it's a little too chick-flick for me. It has little depth beyond ...

Prucila - Welcome to YWS! Maybe you missed the Rules, so I'll just fill you in quickly. We ask that you do two critiques before posting work of your own, ...

I approve of both Suz's soapbox and Brad's critique. I think you would do well to get rid of a lot of what Brad called "tired platitudes about your heart", ...

Hey Parasky! I just noticed that you posted this piece and 'The Battalion" within a day of each other. Please don't post more than two new works a week, as ...

You must think I'm a horrid person for not coming to critique your poem. But here I am. (The truth is that I hate you so much I could not ...

Lyrical Anatomy--I notice you only have one review under your belt, and YWS likes for its members to do at least two before posting a new work. So get cracking, ...

Hey Scorpia - I posted some links for you in response to your question in the "What is Dramatic Poetry?" thread and I believe Suzanne also gave you a link ...

pyro - I see you're new here. Maybe you skipped the Rules? I just want to remind you that YWS requests that you do TWO critiques before posting your own ...

ChildofEden--Here at YWS we want you to do two reviews before posting your own work...a little late here, but maybe you just missed the rules? Anyway, get critiquing and remember ...

Hey ejbrown, I see you haven't written any critiques yet, but you have posted your own piece already. YWS usually requests that you do TWO critiques before posting new work, ...

lulu--I see you're new, so maybe you haven't gotten around to reading the rules. I just want to inform/remind you that YWS would like you to do two critiques before ...