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Please, I need some more replies to this! Please refrain from bumping your posts. And remember, be nice to reviewers! They're trying to help. Reviewers, please remember to judge it ...

My knowledge of the Romantic period is intensely limited...meaning all that I know I learned this year from AP Lit. But I should say you did a pretty fair job ...

I'm a fan, as usual. :) The desert sun sears flesh and bone With all the callousness Of my human soul. These first lines don't pull me in the way ...

Hmm, I first would kindly correct JustDance - while many people prefer rhyming poetry, it is not a "rule" that poetry must rhyme. If free verse is your thing, go ...

To begin...I really like this. I really like the images in this poem...you're always very good with imagery and this was no disappointment. But by the end, I think, it's ...

(I saw that you posted what I presume is your full name in the post, so I edited it out...YWS discourages that because this is the dark scary internet, after ...

Why, there's nothing at all wrong with depressing poems. You've just got to do them convincingly! The main problem I see with this poem is that it dwells on emotion ...

I just thought I'd point out a small inconsistency. In the 1100's, the Catholic church was really the only Christian church in Europe. I believe most people just called it ...

Hi there! I'm here. Consistency/Diction. Okay. So your main problem, I think, is that you combine some really formal writing with contrasting colloquial writing. This doesn't work out because it's ...

Hmm. I'm not sure what to think of this piece. I got to the end and I was like..."Well then. Where was that supposed to go?" I feel like nothing ...

*Locked* These forums are only for poems you have written yourself. If your friend would like some help from the members of YWS, you could try PMing some of your ...

*runs into thread, screeches to halt* I'm here, finally, I promised I would come! Okay. I think this poem suffers from having too many allusions in it. It's like you're ...

Meaning. My main complaint is that it's too vague. It's a rather broad (and thus bland) description of the relation between people (artists here, but also viewers) and art. "Art ...

I swear, Eimear, every time I see a poem by you I go, "I should critique that" and then never do. Well. I'm actually going to this time. I'm not ...

It's called a prose-poem, guys. :D I have to agree with Snoink...the difference between the two sections startled me a little, but I'm not really sure whether or not I ...