Cacophony

I love the imagery in this poem. It's absolutely briliant and it adds to the overall theme :). but I wonder how long until you, also bow down before the ...

Not a bad start...:D. There's a lot of things you could do with this. I think the pacing is off though. It moves too fast. I'm curious though, who is ...

So dragon's started it, huh? Guess I'm not the only one who likes them :D. Anyway, this is pretty good. Your style is interesting. You managed to sum up a ...

I finally caught up on reading this. It's pretty good :) I don't usually like omniscient povs, but I think it works well in the first scene. I like your ...

I like this. You have interesting style, and I love the imagery. I can picture this being read out loud at poetry reading or something. The slight criticism is the ...

This is pretty good. I love how you show the relationship between Ravin and Celareena. They're both interesting characters. Also I really get the sense that this is the calm ...

This is pretty good :). I'm looking forward to reading more. Security officer John Thompson was having a bad morning. It wasn t just the fact he d got up ...

This is a good start :D. I'm curious to see where this story is going. You have some nice descriptions. Some of your sentences are long and hard to follow ...

This poem is pretty good :D. Yeah the subject is a little overused, but I like how you dealt with it. Anyway, I found the rhyming kind distracting. I think ...

I like this. I can't wait to see where you take it :D. [ "The Feikan are a tribe of half-men, half-wildcats. They are known for being extremely violent and ...