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Re: The Truth
thank you for reviewing, I will get straight to fixing that :)
Sep 15, 2019 -
Re: Falling
I know this is a late reply but thank you for the advice, I mainly write how I'm feeling in the moment, leave it for a bit to get reviews ...
Sep 15, 2019 -
Re: Y.W.S.
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Sep 15, 2019
Wow. I was just coming out of reading a poem and decided to click on this, and I do not regret it. This poem is great and obviously just easy ... -
Re: A little bit of love.
Thank you for the advice! I didn%u2019t actually notice those mistakes so thank you :D
Jan 11, 2019 -
Re: A little bit of love.
Thank you for your advice! The reason I didn%u2019t say any POVs is because when someone reads a love story they automatically think femxmale but I feel like how when ...
Jan 10, 2019 -
Re: A little bit of love.
Thank you so much for your advice, the reason I jumped straight to the wedding is because I tried to make it short to see how people liked it and ...
Jan 10, 2019 -
Re: Human
Your welcome! Anything to help :)
Jan 10, 2019 -
Re: Rain | 3 Haiku Poems
Hi! It's me CJ6233, I saw on your profile you needed a review, and I know you already have one but I thought because you helped me I should return ...
Jan 10, 2019 -
Re: The Truth
lmao, thank you again :D
Jan 9, 2019 -
Re: The Truth
Hi Liberty500! I saw your comment on my blog and I'd again like to thank you for that :D. Thanks for the advice, I didn't actually notice those mistakes, I ...
Jan 9, 2019 -
Re: Falling
The same to you with Selina Scarlett, I have taken my poem and changed the given punctuation. I thank you so much because without your support and kind words I ...
Jan 7, 2019 -
Re: Falling
Thank you for your advice Selina, I have changed the ending completely and I feel like it fits better than the one before, thank you again :D
Jan 7, 2019 -
Re: The Path Not Taken
I really like this, I love the ending! The line 'I dare not take a step' doesn't make sense to me with the fact that you went down a path? ...
Jan 7, 2019 -
Re: Falling
I fully understand what you were saying with the lines 1-9 and 10-20, I was a bit tired while writing this so I guess I didn't notice, as for the ...
Jan 7, 2019 -
Re: Falling
Thank you so much for the advice, you don't seem rusty at all by the way :). I myself having wrote poetry in a good time so I didn't really ...
Jan 7, 2019
