CClesta

This is truly amazing. :) I've got just a couple things to say, by way of critique. In the fourth stanza, when you talk about your friends-- All my friends ...

Wonderful poem! I read "I planted a Seed" first, and although each are quite moving alone, they are even more stirring when read back to back. So great job :) ...

Amazing!! I don't have much to say by way of critique. Just a couple things: First, I get that the commas are used to depict a certain style, and I'm ...

Oh my goodness, you legit made me start crying. Great. Now I'm all emotional. And I have to go somewhere soon. Thanks a lot :'D Yeah, I feel the same--everyone ...

Hey, CC here :'D First off...I read the other reviews, and I'd have to say that I disagree with some (one :P) of them. I love the use of those ...

Very wonderful poem! A couple suggestions: There was a little confusion in this section- - For which master shall I slave, the one whom my young life saved? Are you ...

Heylo, Gymnast! This is CC here. First off, I really enjoyed this chapter. One of the strong points I took note of was the consistency of style, which resulted in ...

Hey, CC here! First off, I love the mystery in it. There's not too much as to confuse the reader to the point where they have NO idea what is ...

Omgsh. This is CC, to write a review. This poem is amazing. I was in a super unemotional mood when I started reading this. But I soon became riveted on ...

Heylo, CC here :) This poem has to be one of my favorites I've read here yet. It all flows so naturally, and the rhyming is less forced--good job with ...

Hey, this is CC. I love your poem because it has such a strong, consistent mood to it. It is a tranquil, peaceful mood, with a tint of sadness--and very ...

Very engrossing! Read it multiple times, out of interest. There are a few grammatical errors/confusion that could be fixed. First, the first word of every line should be capitalized. And ...

Hey, this is CC. This is a beautiful poem--very thought provoking! And the rhythm is consistent with the feeling/style of the work, which can sometimes be hard to achieve. There ...