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Re: Your Memory
This is truly amazing. :) I've got just a couple things to say, by way of critique. In the fourth stanza, when you talk about your friends-- All my friends ...
Apr 15, 2017 -
Re: Hopeful Garden (a year after I Planted a Seed)
Wonderful poem! I read "I planted a Seed" first, and although each are quite moving alone, they are even more stirring when read back to back. So great job :) ...
Apr 11, 2017 -
Re: Thief of identity.
Amazing!! I don't have much to say by way of critique. Just a couple things: First, I get that the commas are used to depict a certain style, and I'm ...
Mar 15, 2017 -
Re: The Ending of Us
Oh my goodness, you legit made me start crying. Great. Now I'm all emotional. And I have to go somewhere soon. Thanks a lot :'D Yeah, I feel the same--everyone ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: Friends
Hey, CC here :'D First off...I read the other reviews, and I'd have to say that I disagree with some (one :P) of them. I love the use of those ...
Dec 7, 2016 -
Re: To Whom do I Owe Myself?
Very wonderful poem! A couple suggestions: There was a little confusion in this section- - For which master shall I slave, the one whom my young life saved? Are you ...
Dec 6, 2016 -
Re: *I don't have a title yet*
Heylo, Gymnast! This is CC here. First off, I really enjoyed this chapter. One of the strong points I took note of was the consistency of style, which resulted in ...
Dec 6, 2016 -
Re: Deleted
Hey, CC here! First off, I love the mystery in it. There's not too much as to confuse the reader to the point where they have NO idea what is ...
Dec 4, 2016 -
Re: Snow ramblings
Omgsh. This is CC, to write a review. This poem is amazing. I was in a super unemotional mood when I started reading this. But I soon became riveted on ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Drowning
Heylo, CC here :) This poem has to be one of my favorites I've read here yet. It all flows so naturally, and the rhyming is less forced--good job with ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: Fade,
Hey, this is CC. I love your poem because it has such a strong, consistent mood to it. It is a tranquil, peaceful mood, with a tint of sadness--and very ...
Dec 3, 2016 -
Re: but broken bones will mend.
Very engrossing! Read it multiple times, out of interest. There are a few grammatical errors/confusion that could be fixed. First, the first word of every line should be capitalized. And ...
Dec 2, 2016 -
Re: No Man's Sky
Hey, this is CC. This is a beautiful poem--very thought provoking! And the rhythm is consistent with the feeling/style of the work, which can sometimes be hard to achieve. There ...
Dec 2, 2016