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Okay, Bob. I've read this a couple of times now (it needed it, believe me) and I'll probably read it a couple of more before dragging you into a conversation ...

Hey there pointe! So, I think that you have a nice piece here. You have a good tone and obviously know what you want to do, so that's good. Now, ...

LumiLumiLu. Hello thar. So, as you know, I think that this is quite good. However, I do have to say, I think there's a great deal of excess material that's ...

Hi there, chibi! So, nice poem. I like the stark simplicity. However, I do have a couple of pointers. First off, I would introduce more imagery. Imagery allows is to ...

Hi there! So, I felt like this poem had a lot of emotion back it up, but wasn't really able to express it in a relate-able manner. See, you built ...

Matter Matters- Galerius With the flick of a lazy wrist, we begin in the midst of music and wind, howling chorus ripping into existence like a clap of harmony bent ...

Hey there, molly! So, I thought this was a nice piece, though I have a couple of suggestions. 1. Structure This was a very thin and almost flat feeling piece; ...

Hey there Lav! :) So, I thought this was quite nice. You have a nice command of imagery and you developed a really strong tone. However, I do think that ...

Hey c: Yaaaay. You posted it. It is quite nice. There are, of course, some things that could be changed though. Because I'm lazy and am actually supposed to be ...

Nice title! :P So, like I said before, I really, really, really like this. I definitely think that it could use some reworking, but it's lovely. Now, in our conversations ...

blackbird! I get to finally review something of yours. Sorry it took me so long to get to it. Anywho-- lovely piece. I think that there are definitely some things ...

So, first off, this is more than I expected it to be. I mean, before even seeing it, I set ridiculously high expectations, even worried myself a bit about how ...

Hey Aven :) So, I've given you a review on this on the other site, but some furthered thoughts: I do think that this is quite good, though the flow ...

Loomzichal! Hello there. So, I've read the prose version (which I completely adore, by the way), and I have to say, I found these two pieces extremely different. While I ...

Ryba! Thank you kindly. Did the jackhammer finally do the trick? No accidents with that, I assume? Anyways. Review time. Forgive me if my lucidity is a bit... meh. I ...