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This was an interesting piece.. I looked at the title, and had automatically assumed this was going to be about someone who was vain. Entirely opposite, haha. The first line ...

This was a nice piece.. I really like how the tone contrasts so well with the topic.. how the pace is nice and slow, while it's the end of the ...

This was a good piece.. the emotion is tangible, is easy to relate to. The whole situation is easy to relate to. I would consider breaking this up, or at ...

Short piece... concise. I like it. c: I would consider adding in some more description. The description that you had was nice, but I think it could have been a ...

Hi there. :) I really liked the theme of this piece.. the tone was excellent, a little bit of dismay, a little bit of outrage, a dash of disappointment.. wonderfully ...

OKAY... so, first of all, I liked this piece Now, second of all, What happened to your beautiful rhyming scheme?! You had this perfect little pristine, gorgeous, subtle rhyming scheme ...

Nice piece.. the metaphors were really helpful. I would recommend running this through spell check.. there were quite a few spelling errors, which was pretty distracting. I would also suggest ...

This was a nice piece.. the rhyme scheme was pleasantly consistent, the tone was subtle and sweet.. overall, a nice gentle piece. However, I would consider evening out the rhythm ...

I have to agree with Anger.. this seemed more a rant. I would look over his suggestions.. I'm not that detailed, haha, but I agree with what he said. I ...

Okay, first of all... for a second attempt at poetry, this kinda blew me away. Excellent write.. gorgeous use of imagery, nice cadence, there was a great little rhyming scheme ...

For some reason, this failed to invoke the emotions that it seemed you were trying to invoke. I couldn't really relate to the piece.. not because of a lack of ...

I read the description and inwardly groaned. But this was excellent. The imagery you created with simple phrases was very well done.. beautiful wording, nice descriptions. The ending was great. ...

That was ridiculously, mindblowingly, "I wish I could write even close to that well" good. Incredible images, beautiful thoughts, a stream of consciousness that led me on a journey where ...

I really liked this piece.. I'm not sure if I fully grasped everything in it (all that you would, as the writer), but all that I did catch took my ...

I really enjoyed this story... at first I was a bit skeptical, but the characters were very well developed, the dialog believable, and I thought the amount of description was ...