BurnblazeX

Thanks alot for the review, I will look into the issues and perhaps make an extended version of it with more of what you suggested!

Hehe, well so here, The Date is written first, then the month and then the year, so that date actually says 28th July 2021. And it is of no actual ...

Heyy, Thanks so much for the review This has been very helpfui! Yes I agree that the emotions should have been more deeply explored, but then again, if you think ...

I have taken your suggestion into account and have added break markers

Heyy, thanks for the review. I completely understand your perspective. However. yes! most of the things included *and* mentioned by you do serve a purpose! Lets start with the most ...

Heh, probably the mayo. As for the breaking marker, what would you suggest?

From what I can see, the memories of the holiday, in this case christmas is essentially what inspired this poem. Its not "sad around christmas". Its more of a "sad ...

Ah, my apologies, I will be giving it a read and yours as well again afterwards. Thanks again for the clarification :D

I am so sorry, I do not know why that sent twice, you have my apologies

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Heyy, Good day to you Heh, this made me laugh. I have always been somewhat fascinated with clowns and why someone would willingly go to such length to ridicule themselves ...

Heyy, thanks for the review :DD Now to start with; Someone that young asking for a promise of great magnitude is often times the case, with the adults squirming and ...

Heya! Thanks for the review! Yea I see what you mean about the time jump That was actually meant to throw off the reader and try to come up with ...

Hey there! Thank you so much for taking your time and reviewing it in so much detail. It really does put a smile on my face :D I completely understand ...

Sorry for the late reply, was a bit busy the past few days. I see what you mean, and I'll be sure to fix things where i see fit. As ...

I see what you mean, The pacing was meant to be quite slow until you reached the middle. The structural errors were mainly typos and not paying enough attentions. Thanks ...