Buranko

I have no idea myself what is going on in my head. I see idea/image I put it in. If you want to try and understand them good luck xD

I totally disagree with some of your statements. I do not wish to argue with you, you did provide some good insight like the fact that the train seems to ...

I see what you mean but this would change the poem sooo much. Sounds really cool tho

lo fi is a kind of music that uses rlly chill beats on a moody, calm rythm. it's best known because it uses the crackle and sound imperfections found on ...

Yess I am glad you accept my interpretation

I am glad to be your inspiration hehe

I disagree with the fact that I need to say exactly what the girl is doing. "I allow her to sit" is conflicting the following line which uses the word ...

No problem, if you want to review you need some more. Try talking about structure, message, how this poe made you feel etc. That helps both me and you

I asked my girlfriend to do this with me too but she refused sadge

Yeaaa good idea, i like it more than what i said

Well I have a clear structure of how a poem should ring in my head and I really like metaphors so whenever I see something just handed to you if ...

Ah thanks for the awesome feedback, had fun reading it !

I tried to suggest the creature was really tall. Its head was hanging from the moon

I expected something fantastic/epic/tolkien stuff when I read "by Vil". However what I got was something realistic. Nice surprise !

Thank you, you are so sweet