Buranko

Ty for reviewing. I hate the capitalization as well but too lazy to change it

this is one hell of a vague review

Ty for reviewing Lim, you rock

Ty for the review

I am glad people actually enjoy my random imagery in poems. Ty for reading and leaving ur feedback

I understood that much but it's most likely my view of how a poem should feel like, especially one with this depth, ears seems too blunt and plain.

Interesting view on the poem, totally not expected. I made it like a place where everything one twisted person might want will happen. Murder, theft and other things are legal. ...

Thank you for reviewing, good tips on the rythm and sound devices. I never really care about the structure but this is, I think, some cool advice to make it ...

Ayyy thanks for the sugestion, I love it and will use it

Thank you for taking the time to write a long review and good advice on being careful with the message in the poem and how it comes across to the ...

Heheh the sleeping part is related to my nocturnal lifestyle, sleep in the day, spend the night (btw at the moment it's like 4 in the morning).

Please do, this is my favorite activity when it comes to literary works

Ah yes, my exact thoughts were that either related to Kafka or a creepy manga I read. It didn't relate to either

It is inspired by a song, yes. It makes me sing it in my head whenever I read the title so it can be considered a song

Btw, welcome among the featured members :>