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Re: Happy
About the sudden mood changes, yes they are intentional. Sometimes out of nowhere i feel rlly sad just by watching raindrops so...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Happy
This is the most optimistic review you have given me
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Byzantine music
Well I am certainly enjoying my time here. Thanks for reviewing. I didn't work with imagery as much as some wanted because I tried to talk about the byzantine music. ...
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Why is the sea blue
Thanks, I am glad to hear you liked my poem.
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: The Purge
Yea, "the sirens wail" sounds soo much better. I am always in search of new words to add in my works. Thanks for the helpful review
Sep 24, 2020 -
Re: Why is the sea blue
No problem, different people have different opinions. What I tried was to make the impression of a thinker but with a childish mind, somewhat like me. I agree with most ...
Sep 23, 2020 -
Re: Baba
No problem, good luck in your future works. Also thanks as well
Sep 23, 2020 -
Re: Lullaby
I don't agree with giving more context. Not in this work. This unknown is what gives the poem this sad, nostalgic, mysterious feel and it is what I am trying ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Why is the sea blue
Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and I am soooo glad you liked it.
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Byzantine music
Ayy thanks for the kind words! One question: your user says Pilgrims and throughout the review you used the 1st person plural form of the pronoun. Is it a stylistic ...
Sep 22, 2020 -
Re: Why is the sea blue
Thanks for the synonims, 100% will use them. Ah and also, glad u liked it
Sep 21, 2020 -
Re: Why is the sea blue
Thanks for da' review
Sep 19, 2020 -
Re: Why is the sea blue
Thanks for review bro
Sep 19, 2020 -
Re: Antithesis
Woow thanks for the tips. I do read it loud, but I kinda liked the effect it had. That stumble in the flow gave me the impression of a really ...
Sep 18, 2020 -
Re: In the abode of God...
No problem hehe. Glad I could help
Sep 17, 2020
