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Buranko

Buranko

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    About the sudden mood changes, yes they are intentional. Sometimes out of nowhere i feel rlly sad just by watching raindrops so...

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    This is the most optimistic review you have given me

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Byzantine music

    Well I am certainly enjoying my time here. Thanks for reviewing. I didn't work with imagery as much as some wanted because I tried to talk about the byzantine music. ...

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Why is the sea blue

    Thanks, I am glad to hear you liked my poem.

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Purge

    Yea, "the sirens wail" sounds soo much better. I am always in search of new words to add in my works. Thanks for the helpful review

    Sep 24, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Why is the sea blue

    No problem, different people have different opinions. What I tried was to make the impression of a thinker but with a childish mind, somewhat like me. I agree with most ...

    Sep 23, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Baba

    No problem, good luck in your future works. Also thanks as well

    Sep 23, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lullaby

    I don't agree with giving more context. Not in this work. This unknown is what gives the poem this sad, nostalgic, mysterious feel and it is what I am trying ...

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Why is the sea blue

    Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and I am soooo glad you liked it.

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Byzantine music

    Ayy thanks for the kind words! One question: your user says Pilgrims and throughout the review you used the 1st person plural form of the pronoun. Is it a stylistic ...

    Sep 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Why is the sea blue

    Thanks for the synonims, 100% will use them. Ah and also, glad u liked it

    Sep 21, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Why is the sea blue

    Thanks for da' review

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Why is the sea blue

    Thanks for review bro

    Sep 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Antithesis

    Woow thanks for the tips. I do read it loud, but I kinda liked the effect it had. That stumble in the flow gave me the impression of a really ...

    Sep 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: In the abode of God...

    No problem hehe. Glad I could help

    Sep 17, 2020


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