Bugslake

Actually it depends on what cancer it is. Breast cancer patients get their results that day. I also think it depends on insurance.

This is really a really good first chapter. I'm so glad that you have decided to make another piece of this story. This is just amazing. I've always loved detective ...

Yeah others ha pointed out those mistakes. It's mostly 2D because I create depth throughout the story. I like your flashback idea. I might use it when I come back ...

The whole thought of someone evil and a wanted person, plus the wanted person being helped by evil soldier then falling in love with them. Just a more smashing way ...

Thanks I'll take you up on that.

Thanks, I'm actually considering asking for help. Like having a co-author, I'm just trying to finish the other piece of work before I come back to this.

This is really interesting and I have never thought of this before. Thank you for further educating me in words and meanings behind the words. I hope that you keep ...

This was very cool. I like this story and I want you to keep going with it. Some of the story kind of bored me with its details. I'm sorry ...

Thanks. You might also want I think of telekinetic abilities.

I know what you mean. Not very many people review my work. I guess it's not interesting enough for them.

Telepathy?

It was an assignment for school. I wanted to quickly get it done and not embarrass myself talking about it during the presentation.

Yeah, it is a bit odd. But that's cool, I just learned something new today.

I totally want you to keep going with this. It was really good.

The most crazy people are brilliant. The rest of the world is to small minded to realize it.