Bugslake

This is more of just an idea than a story. Obviously this is very short. There isn't really any plot here, just you making a sequence for a story. This ...

This is very good and I'm glad that I was able to find it and read it. It is very well written and it didn't have any grammatical errors or ...

I totally understand this story. I actually went through this recently and it is very hard. I love how you portrayed how hard it truly is. To love and care ...

I'm so glad that I got to read this first. I had been actually waiting for this because this story was so interesting to me. I completely love what you ...

You have officially made the most immature story. Well done. It was quite interesting how your character told the story. I like the fact that you make the readers feel ...

This is a really interesting beginning. I would totally like to read more about trench coat guy. There was a part where I got slightly confused. It was when you ...

I'm sorry. Not a big fan of Taylor swift. I do like that's fact that you made an entire story from a song. I just wish it hadn't been this ...

This is really good. I would like to read more of this and I love this concept. Your character is amazing and don't get me started on the lieutenant he ...

As I have said before. Brilliant job with writing this. I would really like to read more of this to see what happens in the end. I can't wait to ...

As I said before in one of your other stories I really like this idea. Your characters are amazing and your writing is amazing. I love the fact that non ...

This is really good. I like your idea of an alien device spreading throughout the school giving only one kid information about everyone's thoughts and physical issues. I like how ...

This is really good. You probably haven't had much reviews on this because it is kind of long, but that doesn't matter. Anyway this felt a little choppy to me. ...

Yeah, many others probably got down what I'm going to say to you. Honestly I would've really liked to read this, but whenever someone talked I didn't know there was ...

This is really good. I really like the story that you've got going here. Your female character is very strong and I like that. I am getting the feeling that ...

Wow, can't believe it. She knows this guy too. Man she gets around. Anyways, this one flows super smooth, mostly because there isn't really many words within it. I like ...