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Re: Umbra Finem
This is absolutely amazing, the entire prologue is perfectly written. There is a feeling of melancholy that within this. Then you can feel the hope seep from this man as ...
Tue Dec 24, 2013 5:48 am -
Re: The Chasers - Chapter 3
Yeah, I had actually read this and jut forgot to do a review on it. I'm glad that you had asked me to review for you. This chapter seemed a ...
Tue Dec 24, 2013 4:28 am -
Re: Candles-One
You know what, this is actually a hard piece for me to read because my immediate family member had had cancer. You got the part with Cassidy knowing that she ...
Tue Dec 24, 2013 12:28 am -
Re: Lesser Being Chapter 3
This is really good and I want you to keep going with it. It is an amazing sort of apocalypse story. I really like the fact that they re almost ...
Sat Dec 21, 2013 10:56 pm -
Re: The Hunger Games short fanfic
Man, almost cried at the end. This is so good and you've captured Katniss and Peeta's so well. I am just at a lost for words at how well you've ...
Sat Dec 21, 2013 6:37 am -
Re: Everlark- After Mockingjay
This is so adorable and sad at the same time. I almost cried when I read it. I'm so glad that you took the initiative to write a short about ...
Thu Dec 19, 2013 7:33 pm -
Re: Decisions
Man you have totally put the entire vibe of the walking dead here. I'm a huge fan of it and can't wait until it comes back on in February. Anyway, ...
Thu Dec 19, 2013 5:30 am -
Re: The Love-haters
This is a very interesting idea involving love. You did a great job in creating a sense of sorrow and despair. I think that the best thing that's in here ...
Thu Dec 19, 2013 4:20 am -
Re: The Chasers - Prologue
Wow, the beginning of this story was amazing an absolutely surprising. I'm just so surprised at what happened in only the first couple of paragraphs. I feel really bad for ...
Thu Dec 19, 2013 2:00 am -
Re: Trial Children
This is actually really good. There are a few mistakes, like missing a word or misplacing quotation marks. Other than that you are doing a really good job. I'm so ...
Wed Dec 18, 2013 5:58 pm -
Re: Tease Her
This is huge, how you have completely been able to describe an issue that goes on today in real life. I could feel all of the pain that this girl ...
Tue Dec 17, 2013 2:07 pm -
Re: Because I Am Afraid
This truly explains the reason why people stop moving forward. They are holding themselves back. The way you have created it into an action packed adventure is just amazing. There ...
Mon Dec 16, 2013 7:43 pm -
Re: Let Me Love You (Chapter One)
Wow, this was really good and I really liked it. I love the friend zone part and everything. I didn't understand the ending very much, but I'm sure that you ...
Mon Dec 16, 2013 7:33 pm -
Re: Here Be Dragon
I think this is actually mind of cute. It isn't the normal sort of dragon story that you read. I don't think that anyone else has ever thought of a ...
Mon Dec 16, 2013 7:20 pm -
Re: The Hybrids (chapter 6)
Yeah, there are a few mistakes in here. I also believe that kidnapping has two p's in it. You already know that straight was spelled wrong. Other than that this ...
Mon Dec 16, 2013 4:49 am
