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Re: Love Stories
Hi, I'm Sarah. Firstly, WOW! Even though I'm gay, this poem still gives meaning to my life. My fiancee and I are not perfect but I wish that sometimes someone ...
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Re: Numb.
Hello, I'm Sarah. First off, what a great job. This poem is easy to relate to, not only because of substance abuse, but because of self harm. I'm a self ...
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Re: Kisses to Tears
Hello. I love how this is short and sweet. You've got a good talent the way that you compare the way the love slides away like the tears sliding down ...
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Re: Daughter, I am sorry
I'm not the type of person to like fantasy, but holy cow. I think you did a very good job. My favorite line is: "Daughter, I am sorry, But panthers ...
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Re: Watercolour Winter.
You did a very good job. The way you write flows wonderfully. My favorite stanzas are: "Sparkling snowflakes snatched by the breeze, waft over rooftops, hills and trees, and to ...
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Re: If Broken Hearts were like Broken Bones
Hello, Sarah here. You have yourself a wonderfully written poem. I love that you compared a broken heart with broken bones, and the similes are phenomenal. This poem really speaks ...
Jan 10, 2014
