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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.03)

    Salutations again, Buggie! I hope to review all of your chapters today, so don't expect any reviews of the extended sort. I shall keep them concise and follow the established ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.02)

    Salutations. So, this review has been more than a month overdue... Nevertheless, I signed up for NaRevWriMo, so this will be killing two birds with the one metaphorical stone. Also, ...

    Sep 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 5: (part 1)

    Salutations. Even though I haven't read chapter four, I shall nevertheless liberate this chapter from the Green Room's wretched tentacles! (Yes, yes, I know that's not the way it should ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Humor Re: The Profane Parables and Other Nihilistic Narrations by a Perverse Pariah, 2

    Salutations. Salutations. I apologise for not starting at chapter one, but I would rather write a review for a chapter with less than two than give an extra one to ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Script » Film, Dramatic Re: Homecoming - Act I

    Salutations. Goodness, this is long. Of course, it is a script, after all, and anything short from you would be scandelous, considering your talent. But I can see why people ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.01)

    Salutations. If I am to defeat you in our Agni Kai, the least I can do is make your first chapter for LMS II my final element. (I am referring ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Be yourself, everyone else is already taken

    Salutations. Ah, it's always a pleasure to see a new member dive into the world of literature, especially here, on the Young Writers Society. I see you have been welcomed ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: When The Trees Guided Me Home - Part 3

    Salutations. It seems that nowadays everyone is dividing their short stories into multiple parts. I have read, but not commented on, the two previous parts, so I don't see why ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: A Wanderer's Love

    Salutations. My friend, I have known for some time now that you are in love, but this poem is truly astounding. It is, without a doubt, the best poem - ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1

    Salutations. This review has been long overdue, I know. Fortunately, my teachers were merciful today, so I can finally give your chapter the attention it deserves! My Legend: Red - ...

    Jul 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: A new death.

    Salutations. I'm glad you asked me to review this short story, since it is very well-written. You wanted to know whether you should submit this to that magazine, and my ...

    Jul 14, 2015
  • Article / Essay » General, Realistic Re: A condicao humana e a ansia da liberdade

    Salutations. Unfortunately, I can neither speak nor read Portuguese, so this work is just a collection of letters to me. However, I can run it through Google Translate, but I ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Other » General, Other Re: Red Velvet Terminology

    Salutations. Well, this isn't actually a chapter, but since it is in the Green Room, it must still be reviewed. First, I shall give you some advice, and then I ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Chapter One: A Cycle Begins

    Salutations. First off, whoa. This is a long chapter. Now, I like long chapters, since I write them myself, but in my experience, people are intimidated by long chapters here ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Nine

    Salutations. I apologise for seemingly appearing out of nowhere, but your work has been in the Green Room for some time now. I believe every work on this site deserves ...

    May 31, 2015


Go and make interesting mistakes, make amazing mistakes, make glorious and fantastic mistakes. Break rules. Leave the world more interesting for your being here.
— Neil Gaiman