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Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.03)
Salutations again, Buggie! I hope to review all of your chapters today, so don't expect any reviews of the extended sort. I shall keep them concise and follow the established ...
Sep 24, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.02)
Salutations. So, this review has been more than a month overdue... Nevertheless, I signed up for NaRevWriMo, so this will be killing two birds with the one metaphorical stone. Also, ...
Sep 9, 2015 -
Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 5: (part 1)
Salutations. Even though I haven't read chapter four, I shall nevertheless liberate this chapter from the Green Room's wretched tentacles! (Yes, yes, I know that's not the way it should ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: The Profane Parables and Other Nihilistic Narrations by a Perverse Pariah, 2
Salutations. Salutations. I apologise for not starting at chapter one, but I would rather write a review for a chapter with less than two than give an extra one to ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Homecoming - Act I
Salutations. Goodness, this is long. Of course, it is a script, after all, and anything short from you would be scandelous, considering your talent. But I can see why people ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.01)
Salutations. If I am to defeat you in our Agni Kai, the least I can do is make your first chapter for LMS II my final element. (I am referring ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Be yourself, everyone else is already taken
Salutations. Ah, it's always a pleasure to see a new member dive into the world of literature, especially here, on the Young Writers Society. I see you have been welcomed ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: When The Trees Guided Me Home - Part 3
Salutations. It seems that nowadays everyone is dividing their short stories into multiple parts. I have read, but not commented on, the two previous parts, so I don't see why ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: A Wanderer's Love
Salutations. My friend, I have known for some time now that you are in love, but this poem is truly astounding. It is, without a doubt, the best poem - ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 1
Salutations. This review has been long overdue, I know. Fortunately, my teachers were merciful today, so I can finally give your chapter the attention it deserves! My Legend: Red - ...
Jul 23, 2015 -
Re: A new death.
Salutations. I'm glad you asked me to review this short story, since it is very well-written. You wanted to know whether you should submit this to that magazine, and my ...
Jul 14, 2015 -
Re: A condicao humana e a ansia da liberdade
Salutations. Unfortunately, I can neither speak nor read Portuguese, so this work is just a collection of letters to me. However, I can run it through Google Translate, but I ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Red Velvet Terminology
Salutations. Well, this isn't actually a chapter, but since it is in the Green Room, it must still be reviewed. First, I shall give you some advice, and then I ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Chapter One: A Cycle Begins
Salutations. First off, whoa. This is a long chapter. Now, I like long chapters, since I write them myself, but in my experience, people are intimidated by long chapters here ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Nine
Salutations. I apologise for seemingly appearing out of nowhere, but your work has been in the Green Room for some time now. I believe every work on this site deserves ...
May 31, 2015
