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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.05)

    Willow, Divinity, Rick, Willow... Martin? I doubt there is a pattern now, you probably just write as you find necessary. I should have known, since following a pattern makes the ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.04)

    Hmm, it is 14:30 now, and once again, the route is Route 31, so I am predicting... Willow. *reads* Whoo, I was right! Notes 1. I am now utterly boggled. ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.03)

    So, first it's Willow, then Divinity, and then Rick (though I initially thought it would be Mr Pyus - sneaky). The time perplexes me, however, since it exposed a major ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.02)

    Ah, Divinity is the character from whose perspective this part is told. I shall see if there's a pattern in the order of the points of view, and since the ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 2.01)

    Is it just me, or did you rename your chapters? For some reason, I had said in a previous review (I think the one for chapter 1.08) that it was ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.12)

    Salutations, Buggie! I have finally arrived to resume with the reviews for your chapters! It's ironic, if my previous review is read directly before this one. Notes 1. Though your ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.11)

    The final chapter, woohoo! (Well, the final chapter you have released thus far - obviously it will be many months more before this novel is finished.) It took me long ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.10)

    Two chapters left! I am no longer sure whether I can complete RevMo, since have to write at least twenty more reviews today. I better write more quickly. O_o Notes ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.09)

    Three chapters to go, then I'm done! Of course, then I still have Tort's and Ender's chapters to review, and I have to write them all today, if I want ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.08)

    Salutations! And we arrive at Chapter Two. I see what you mean by the Thursday and Friday scenes, since it was Tuesday throughout chapter one, but now it is Wednesday. ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.07)

    The final part of chapter one at last! Well, I'm excited to see what happens next, and judging from the glimpses I stole from the other reviews, it will be ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Okami and The Three Colonies

    Salutations! I realise it's been almost two years since you were last active on YWS (it will be exactly two years in eighteen days, it seems), but today, a friend ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.06)

    Salutations, Buggie! As promised, I have returned to finish what I started, and I see there is another shiny, new chapter to review as well! Notes 1. No notes, yay! ...

    Sep 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.05)

    There's this interesting thing people have started doing: it entails combining your greeting and introduction into a single paragraph! Innovative, isn't it? Do you think I should try it? (If ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.04)

    I'm back again! So, I'm supposed to write an introduction here, but everything I want to say actually belongs in the impressions. But hey, I have an introduction now, so ...

    Sep 24, 2015


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