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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: A letter to my mother tongue

    Salutations! I'm relatively inexperienced at reviewing poetry, so I can't offer advice as insightful as that of the wonderful alliyah's down below. Nevertheless, the best way to learn is to ...

    Sep 8, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Things To Tell A Teenager

    Salutations! I don't usually review poetry, so I hope this review will be useful to you! I looked up some information on poetry in any case (just so I don't ...

    Sep 7, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Conics Unfortunately: 1

    Salutations, Buggie! You certainly don't need any more reviews on this chapter, but you've been bugging me to review it for more than half a year, so here I finally ...

    Sep 6, 2018
  • Other » Other, Other Re: A Hunter's Guide to Ethereal Bacteria

    Salutations! Owing to my current and pending workload, I'm going to be eleventh houring reviews for at least half the month. (How can we only have seven weeks of class ...

    Sep 5, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Impersonation

    Salutations! I'm not gonna lie, I needed to review something before midnight, so I'm reviewing this for no particular reason (it just happened to have the fewest reviews of your ...

    Sep 4, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Fate

    Salutations! I see you're new to the site, so allow me to be the first moderator to welcome you! If you have any questions, feel free to ask them either ...

    Sep 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 2

    Salutations, again! This is my actual review for the day, but I couldn't simply write it without leaving a comment on the first chapter beforehand. I'm trying to keep my ...

    Sep 2, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: One Year Later

    Salutations, TMonaa! I see you're new to the site, so allow me to congratulate you on submitting your first work! Sharing one's writing with the world is always an endeavour ...

    Sep 1, 2018
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Literature Re: Azarel

    Salutations, lizzie! You have my sympathy for the trouble regarding your account; I hope the matter will be resolved soon, but if not, that it at least becomes less inconvenient. ...

    Jan 28, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Thunderfleece Ch-1 – Padlocked Pandemonium

    Salutations, Tort! This is not only my first review of the year, but also my first review this vacation. Scandalous, I know, but at least I'm finally writing one! Hopefully ...

    Jan 21, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 2.1 (Homeland Security)

    Salutations! I'm a bit late this time and would have delayed the review even further, but one ever knows for how long a work will remain in the Green Room. ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 1 (Balancing Act)

    Salutations, Fox! I haven't reviewed consistently since 2015, so I do apologise in advance if my reviews are too technical and focused on grammar than you would like, as that ...

    Jul 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Destruction// Prologue

    Salutations! As with any prologue, there is a sense of obscurity and mystery surrounding this work, which is good! You want a prologue to be intriguing, but without giving away ...

    Jul 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]

    Salutations! So, I'm finally here! I know you'd prefer that I review the part that has only one review on it, not seven, but I'd like to have the context ...

    Sep 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 33

    Salutations, Aurora! So, what brings me here, to your novel? Well, there were twenty minutes left of the July 2016 Pokémon GO Review Day, which gives me enough time to ...

    Jul 31, 2016


You can cut all the flowers, but you cannot stop Spring from coming.
— Pablo Neruda