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Re: Life and Death
Fiery Salutations Umm, you do realise that this is a short story, and not a script? Because you classified it as a script, it counts as a script, but I ...
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Re: 10 Things That Someone Special Has Taught Me
Fiery Salutations You have an interesting perspective, but make no mistake, it is very entertaining. 1.Honesty is overrated – I tell you things always and embarrass myself, always . I ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Nothing Will Stop Me
Fiery Salutations I am surprised that there are so few lyrics on YWS! Yours are literally one of the few, so I decided to review it. I wake up, I ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Belinda Cabbotry: The Weak and the Wary (PART 8)
Fiery Salutations I do not recall that short stories may have several parts this long, as that makes them more akin to a novella, but seeing as you have classifed ...
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Re: Machiavelli's "The Art Of War" - an essay on it, part 2.
Fiery Salutations This is much more interesting than your previous article, and more informative to boot. In your first paragraph's first few sentences, you state how Cosimo called a meeting ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Machiavelli's "The Art Of War" - an essay on it.
Fiery Salutations I knew that Sun Tzu had written the Art of War, but Machiavelli ? This should be interesting... ...Or not. How ironic is it not that just as ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Bad Posture Could End Up Killing You in the End!
Fiery Salutations As you are aware, we must review articles for the Elite Eight Challenge, so here I am. Also, I should like to thank you for your magnificent efforts ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The hole in the refugee tent
Fiery Salutations This is a very powerful poem, I must say. I read it much faster than I had thought I would, but enjambment tends to do that. ;) I ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Dreaming of Autumn
Fiery Salutations I should like to thank you for all the wonderful reviews you have written thus far. I still need to review a few poems, and seeing as you ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: The Final Hunt
Fiery Salutations I never knew you wrote poetry as well... Nevertheless, I cannot think of a better way to earn my third star than to review a poem about wolves ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: This is War; Chapter one
Fiery Salutations I see my fellow Wolf-Musketeer and rival has beaten me to this chapter... Nevertheless, consider this a thank-you-review from your Team Captain for all the hard work you ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: A Twins Hunt - A Cold Night (The Prologue I forgot about...)
Fiery Salutations I cannot say I have read a story like this for quite some time. That is not a bad thing, to be sure, and though I am religious, ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Tristesse: Chapter 1 Friendship, oh holy sacrifice.. (Part I) EDITED
Fiery Salutations Oh my goodness! When I saw that you had divided Chapter One into several parts, I knew that your chapter would be long, but even your first part ...
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Re: John's Quest~Chapter Three
Fiery Salutations It seems that you are writing several novels. That is a daring venture, just make sure that you do not spend too little time on one of your ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Things Fall Apart: Chapter 21: Juno's Lock-In 1.3 (The Last)
Fiery Salutations Firstly, I would like to congratulate you on making it so far! Many people have an excellent idea for a novel (or so they believe) but as soon ...
Jul 27, 2014